you make me want to cry...
and i totally mean that in an awesome way.
i really really love the story of lenne and shuyin and how rushed and desperate their final moments together were...
u kind of capture that very well.
you actually make it easy for people to imagine them running away...and then time goes so slowly just before they're about to die...
aw and shuyin's sad eyes...:thrashes around:
your very good!

its so sad! but i luv it so much!

wow! Really good and extremely deep! You did really good, keep up the nice work! In the sea of Lenne/Shuyin fics (which there aren't many) this was really well-written, so write more stories! You shall be famous in later life! *cough* But you are muy bueno when it comes to this kind of stuff, obviously, especially at the end. Why don't you write more romance fics on Lenne and Shuyin? Wait, no, don't do that, because that is what I am doing! No, its not posted yet, but shoule be by the end of this weekend (hint, hint, wink, wink, nudge, nudge)

I'm puttin this on my fave stories and you on author alert! Hopefully, you can keep this kind of work up. If not... *sharpens knives*. Anyway, good job and please if you hve time, could you review my stories also? Especially the upcoming one on Lenne and Shuyin (note: it is NOT a one-shot) ?? Please? Be on the lookout! Anyway, the most important thing is you keep writing. Sorry for the long review...