i love it
but it's a bit confusing
sorry

I am quite suprised you have not received more reviews! This fic is amazing and I truely loved that it was short & sweet & too the point! You did a wonderful job!

Hi there! Just wanted to say good job. Thank you very much!

That was so totally awsome, if nobody likes this they need to get a brain and well you can find something to do.

kissy time bye now

THAT WAS AMAZING!
GREAT STORY!

is there any possible way for you to make this fic read easier?

i cant see past the block of text, there's no spacing or anything.

i've read most of your fics and i think this would be a great one if i could just read past this chapter...

can you fix it?

...finished? but but but... i mean really finished? is there a sequel? i'm gonna go look.

I realize that it's been a while since you've last updated, but I would definately recomend uploading The Sun is the Moon, it is if not my favorite then definately one of them. I just finished rereading it, it took me about two weeks but I did it! (I read a chapter a day, most days until today where I read four). It's a shame that not more people know about it. Also I want to add it to my favorite and never even not remember it for even a moment again and can't find it again. As for this one, it seems a little like the other one but more like a previous one. It's still good and an interesting twist.

The summary is what drew me; the part about her returning, but not to the Scout's side? I knew it would be good and I had to read it right then and I wasn't disappointed. It was very well written and you portrayed Serena wonderfully. I was apalled at what she'd been through and what she had to become and yet I was hoping that at her deepest, she was the same girl she had been. I must admit that I was shocked that she moved away and quite interested to see how you were going to make the Moon princess thing work. I was a little confused at first how Selene was conceived, but I thought that the Dream/memory cleared things up quite well. But why wasn't she Rini?

I wish you had done more with the part about Serena being forced to be something greater than she is. I think Luna said that, but I can't swear to it.

Basically, I really enjoyed it, I hope to read more from you and I'm adding you to all the lists!

OMG!! LOVED IT! This is one of the best fics I have ever read. I am working on reading the rest of your stories now, I'll bet they are just as good. I hope to see more great works in the future. Once again... I'm in LURVE with dis story!:P

Oh, that was great! The only thing I had problems with was the formatting, but thats a technical thing and doesn't really matter :)

I'm off to see if I can find more of your work!

loved the story..

this was great only darien was a bit harsh to me and everything else was alright but your paragraphs and stuff should be spaced more ^-^

Very good. I love it. A lot of action. great. Too bad about all they had went through.

~Draegyn~

Hello first of all I just want to say that I absolutely love all of your stories!!!!. I'm writing you here becasue you don't have your e-mail posted. My other reason for writing you is that I was wondering if I could post your stories on my website. I would really appreciate it if you'd let me. If you would like to look at the site here it is www.geocities.com/rayearth220 . Please respond back soon!!! My e-mail address is miko633@hotmail.com Thank you!!!

~Miko~