Aww. : Love it.

You shoulda put in some HoroxTamao, too, if you're a fan. :)

OMG that was an AWESOME STORY

I mean seriously it made me almost cry

remind you

I'm not the wimpy sort

so

Keep Writing and Rock On

Angleico3156789

Aww! I'm sorry to hear about your brother, if it makes you happy, my first brother died before I was born too. :( But that's okay, I still have two more brothers to beat up my exes! LoL

ren good job! i really like the way you create your story, i should say that you are really talented! pls. dont discriminate your own work. OK? I like it talaga! hope that you will write some more! keep that brain working ren!

aww.. that was sad... magaling ka nman ate ren eh! you're just underestimating yourself... ang sweet nito.. kaso, parang naawa ako kay horo... wala c tamao? nyaha.. goodluck sa winter dreams! GodBless!

Aw, I feel sorry for you. I myself have lost a sister...Even if she is nineteen years older than me...Now, back to the story. Ang galing! is that how you spell it? I dont even know my native toung...

awesome story dudette...i think

gAWD! u make me want to snug a guy in the middle of the street and claim him as my big brother and call him onii-chan horohoro! gees horohoro was so sweet, and i really like how you portrayed ren and pirika's feelings)) really poignant stuff!

yay!loved it

IT WAS SO GRAIT!

I like the part when Horo tolk about Hao, you write it in funny way

THAT WAS... THAT WAS... THAT WAS AWESOME! BRAVO! BEAUTIFUL WELL WRITTEN! I LOVED IT VERY MUCH... since one it was horohoro and 2 it was great and 3 because i loved it... so much for rasons...

I love this story! Brother and sister relationships rock! Not in the romantic way! The big brother wanting saftey for the younger sister way!

I love it.

i did what i promised hehe

that was OMG, I love it!

aww

i wish i had a brother (like that)

hehe it made me feel all warm and fuzzy inside

that was beautiful and sweet... pshaw, if only my bro was like that.