 RapunzelK 2008-01-22 . chapter 38Excellent.
You know, I hadn't read your fic before, but I'm happy to report I find it every bit as enjoyable as your art. ^_^
Only small remark: too bad Glitch couldn't steal Welman's code back the way Hex bestowed what she had on little Enzo. Then we could have had a full happy family again. ^_^
And I'm sure Kilobyte would be infinitely easier to deal with then Megabyte. :P |
 Glitch 2007-05-30 . chapter 1 I cannot believe that pure mushy romance fics, with some almost amounting to smut, get more reviews than your BRILLIANT fic. I'm serious. It was well-written, had an ACTUAL CONCLUSION unlike *most fics* lying around, every reason you gave for something happening on the show was pefectly plausible, the chapters were kept short and sweet, and like the other reviewer said,the little grammar nazi within me was placated so, why oh why do the people prefer to review utter rubbishes of romance fics instead of this perfect little gem straight from the cave of wonders?! WHY! WHY! Bunch of dipswitches I say, oh well their loss. *cries in a corner and loses faith in humanity* |
 Sparkle Itamashii 2007-02-09 . chapter 38Well, I hardly ever submit signed reviews to stories but this merits it.
I clicked on your story while I was clicking on pretty much every story so I could get a feel for the quality of ReBoot fanfiction before I started seriously looking... turns out most of it is really crap, but I suppose I expected that from kid's TV. I admit I took a slightly more serious interest in your story when I clicked because it was about Glitch, my favorite.
Honestly, I'm impressed. Your spelling and grammar was almost always spot on and your sentence structures were good. You know how to vary them so the mind doesn't get tired of reading the same structure over and over. At first I thought that the shortness of the chapters was going to be irritating, but it turns out you knew what you were doing. They are a perfect length for the character, dropping out and picking up in just the right places. So kudos for making friends with my grammar nazi side right off the bat.
The story content was also very interesting. You followed the storyline, which at first I thought was going to be offputting but again... you clearly knew what you were doing and did it well. Providing Glitch's point of view through the ordeal was veryvery clever and you pulled it off beautifully. You explained things that seemed a little odd in the series, and importantly, you really gave Glitch (and the other keytools) the personality they deserved all along.
I think my favorite idea in this story was that Glitch knew the other bob was a trojan horse virus. I think that makes so much sense, and I really liked all of his commentary involving it. I liked how you portrayed Copeland as well, and how he and Glitch interacted.
I would also like to compliment you on how you continued on past when the series 'ended' and went on to explain how they got rid of Megabyte. You kept it short and tactful and just the way it should have been. Glitch's interpretation and commentary on the other characters kept in line with the rest of what you had written ('in character' wise) and what was in the actual show; I could honestly see what you had written being how the series would be concluded after season 4.
All in all, very well done. Thank you sharing!
~Sparkle Itamashii |
 avidgokufan 2006-04-18 . chapter 38I enjoyed this story. I thought the end of Megabyte was slightly anticlimatic, but I still greatly enjoyed it. You did a good job answering some of those questions that I have had from the show. Keep writing. |
 Zuzanny 2006-01-24 . chapter 38That was fantastic! I was planning to go out, but had to stay until I finished reading the whole thing. :) |
 BOC42 2005-10-05 . chapter 38Wow!! I'm very impressed! I always kinda thought Glitch had thoughts and feelings, but you made him come alive for me. That bit at the beginning was awesome "any time now, guys..."
Also, thanks for having it go all the way through season 4. See, I didn't ever get to see this season, so I'm going off of music videos and fanfics. This cleared a lot up!
An amazing story; thanks for writing it. :)
Stay frosty! |
 fireinu 2005-09-29 . chapter 38I like the story. It was interesting and diferent. |
 Pokeprof 2005-08-21 . chapter 38I must say that it was a very satisfying fic. I love the fact that you did it from glitchs point of view and that we get to see an ending for the season. Though I always liked glitch bob better your fic should be a highly rated one. You could told us Glitchs gender though. |
 TheFanaticInTraining 2005-08-07 . chapter 27Wh00t! I love this story! |
 Brenren 2005-07-19 . chapter 27I love the fact that this story centers on Glitch and puts in him the lime light for a change. You've given us a believable account of how the keytools survived and ended up in Bob as well. Very well written as well. Kudos to you. :D |
 TheFanaticInTraining 2005-06-08 . chapter 23*claps* It's so wonderful to see some good reboot fanfic! I love Glitch's point of view, and his(?) sarcasticness is hilarious! |
 shield-maiden 2005-06-01 . chapter 10I like it. However, I have one tiny question...Do you realize that log 8 and log 9 are the exact same chapter submitted twice? I'd like to see what log 9 is supposed to be, it would fill in a few gaps. But other than that, good job. |