your grammer and editing sucks.

I really like this story. It was very interesting. Miralla's sisters, you did a good job creating them.

hey, i'm a first timer, and must say u have rather lengthy chapters, but their good anyways, took me lik the whole afternoon to read, guess i'm a slow reader, anywho, update soon, i'll be waiting :D

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Hello! I'm really loving your story right now. Michelle acts like my friend sometimes... and Melody seems pretty quiet. Anyway, please update soon!

- AnimeHaven