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| opalish 2005-06-11 ch 1,  | abuseSam/Kawalsky? That's one I haven't seen before. Excellent, as always. |
| MajorMercedes 2005-05-29 ch 1, anon. | abuseGood job, and please tell me this isn't a one-shot, there has GOT to be more right?? if there isn't make some more! cause its good... |
| gina 2005-05-28 ch 1, anon. | abuseThat was great! Good. So Jack. |
| Jennyvre Moss 2005-05-28 ch 1, | abusethat was pretty good...i love when jack is confused..its so funny...and i loved the last sentence...keep writing |
| Sci Fi Fan Gillian 2005-05-28 ch 1, | abuseThat was good. |
| froggy0319 2005-05-28 ch 1, | abuseYep that would be the exact way Jack would think at the end :) Hope that made sense. Another one that I truly enjoyed as I can see Jack counting the days till he gets to kiss Sam ;) |
| shiny silver grl 2005-05-28 ch 1, | abuseHeh...this is too funny. I lol @ this bit: "On the other hand, if she was in Samantha’s exact situation then he would be dead: kissing her would be a lot more challenging, and she probably wouldn’t enjoy it that much (and he probably wouldn’t either, for that matter). That couldn’t have been what she meant", and then the follow-up last paragraph. I especially loved Jack's discombobulation toward the end; it's always funny to see him off-balance. Heh also @ "And again he found himself on the receiving end of that ‘I thought my commanding officer couldn’t get any more stupid, but I was wrong,’ look." Cute...fluffy...not even a hint of angst or anger. Are you feeling well? *g* Nah, I shouldn't tease you. But it is heartening...it hopefully means you're feeling more upbeat :) -sil |
| SuSiESG1 2005-05-28 ch 1, | abuseCUTE keep up the good writing susie |