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| Ducky'sgirl4ever 2008-06-22 ch 1,  | abuseA great story. I liked the part where Gil was talking to his team before he left. |
| bluesun-cor 2006-01-21 ch 1, | abuseWow...that's almost all I can really say.I've read about ten of your shorter stories so far and every one of them have been so good.They all portray the characters perfectly.I can really picture it as a real episode in my mind.Don't stop writing you,these stories are great and I can't wait to read more of them. |
| toxicat 2005-06-01 ch 1, | abuseThat was so good! *sniff* |
| Sunrays and Saturdays 2005-05-29 ch 1, | abuseVery beautifully written and tenderly sad. I really enjoyed this short piece :) - Ash |
| DaVinci13 2005-05-28 ch 1, | abuseThere are plenty of stories out there that try and get across the emotions and feelings when Grissom leaves the lab, but I think yours is by far the best. It's perfect; each goodbye fit each character beautifully. Way to go. ;) |
| Camilla Sandman 2005-05-28 ch 1, | abuseSad, but nicely written nevertheless and nice character touches for how each of them would say goodbye. |
| Frizance 2005-05-28 ch 1, | abuseThat was so sad. |
| Coccinella 2005-05-28 ch 1, | abuseAw, this was so sad. And, don't worry, it didn't suck at all. Hope you're getting yourself out of writer's block because I can't wait to read the next chapter of An Exercise in Futility (especially after the sneak peek ;P). Keep up the great work! Elisa |
| KleeNut214 2005-05-28 ch 1, | abuseAugh, this is so sad :( |
| AngelApple70x7 2005-05-28 ch 1, | abuseThis was great, made me a little teary. sounds like something the evil PTB would pull. AA |
| svcmc 2005-05-28 ch 1, anon. | abuseOne of the saddest things I've ever read. He's free of work and responsibilities, but also from any chance he might allow for human connection. Breaks my heart!! |