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| Weiila 2008-05-26 ch 1, | abuseI just realized that I have never reviewed this story, which makes me feel pretty stupid to say the least, considering that I've read it at least five or six times. This is an absolute work of art. Your characterization is beautiful, the musings, fears and viewpoints of Thrall and Jaina feels very real and your narrative is fantastic. Now, it does get a little wordy at times - many sentences are very, very long - but with your way of writing its hardly noticable because I'm so caught up in what's going on. And despite how serious the tone of this piece really is, those moments of warm humor between Thrall and Jaina has me rolling everytime. |
| san 2008-02-20 ch 1, anon. | abuseThis was all kinds of beautiful. |
| The.Neutral.Zinner 2007-11-10 ch 1, | abuseAn exciting story! |
| Sealink 2007-08-01 ch 1, | abuseMy God, you're talented. This was the first Thrall/Jaina fic I've read and I think I'm ruined for the rest of them. Excellent work. |
| Don Kringel 2007-02-12 ch 1, | abusewow... It almost made me cry! Great Story...still.. so sad... |
| monsley 2006-10-16 ch 1, | abuseHeart-breaking. You have so much insight into these characters, and I absolutely love the way you write them. Wildly evocative. Thanks again for writing, and I hope you'll get back to writing them someday. |
| Llowe 2005-10-07 ch 1, anon. | abuseI just thought you ought to know that I was grinning like an idiot by the end of this. Man, I want to read more of this stuff. |
| Riana1 2005-09-10 ch 1, | abuseTruly beautiful. Kindred spirits indeed. |
| Wyn G. Aarden 2005-07-24 ch 1, anon. | abuseSee, now I'm stalking you. I love your characterization of both. I could only hope to be as good. *salutes* I loved the bonus Orc campaign. I remember reading the RPG books before I did that campaign and hearing about Daelin's invasion and thinking "wait, when did this happen?" Play world of warcraft at all? ^^ Jaina: Welcome to Theramore. Have you come to serve the Alliance? Thrall: Welcome to Orgrimmar. Have you come to serve the Horde? Isn't that sweet, they even think alike. ^^ |
| Rosann 2005-07-11 ch 1, anon. | abuseAlways appreciate a Jaina x Thrall pairing. :) |
| AzureDragoness 2005-06-05 ch 1, | abuseBeen rather remiss in reviewing this lovely story. Like your last fic "Rules of Engagement", this fic was thrilling, even if I can't quite say why this time. Thumbs up for the TxJ hints; there should be more fics with them. Since I can't really think of any witty ways to put it, great job with this one-shaot, hope you keep writing more. |
| Rowan Seven 2005-06-02 ch 1, | abuseA splendid story. Your depictions of Thrall and Jaina dealing with the fact that their treaty is virtually dead are wonderfully detailed and insightful. You endowed them and their relationship with a pleasing degree of understated intimacy and openness, and the little, quaint touches such as Jaina mending Thrall's clothes and Thrall laughing at Jaina's jokes added a pleasant depth to the proceedings. I was particularly impressed by how well you expressed how close they are while simultaneously reminding the reader that they are an orc and a human and there is a barrier dividing them. I keenly felt the intangible issues and obstacles keeping them separated despite their closeness while reading this story. Good job on incorporating WoW developments into the story too. The part about the lazy peons brought a smile to my face. Your writing style took a little getting used to, but it is very effective in combining a narrative of events with the simultaneous interjection of personal thoughts and feelings. Overall, I was delighted by reading this story and thank you for sharing it. |
| Sheitan 2005-05-29 ch 1, | abuseDamn girl, this is a work of beauty! Your writing is just the level of details I crave - nothing too revealing and still a hoard of information to delve into. And you've hit upon some details (read: tusks and no kissing) that i've considered my self. Strange. |
| Kyosei 2005-05-29 ch 1, | abuseAh I love it. I've been looking for a good Warcraft story ;) You've made my night. Plus I've always had a thing for the Thrall x Jaina pairing. Screw Arthas that bastard haha! |
| samus18 2005-05-28 ch 1, | abuseBeautiful way of writing. I really enjoyed reading this. You should continue. If you did, I'd definitely read it. Totally awsome. =) |