Dang, this is too funny. I really like the number format and the last line.

Wow. How...real. It's so real, it's so scary. OMG. It's not romantic and its not pretty, but it's true, aint it?

one... draco IS attractive and IS a sex god. two... pansy is not what i had in mind to be with draco. im more of a ginny/draco. and your sex scene is just short... i like hot stuff.

your poem...story...watever it is, is really good.
you have a writing style i would die to hav, cuz trust me, ive tried writing stuff like this and failed miserably.
you did a good job of capturing how pansy feels, and how draco isnt all that great, if that makes sense.
i like it.

Ha, I love the last line. Really, I just like the whole thing. Well done.

Loved it... very realistic, and creative.

I liked this.

Lol I really enjoyed that. It made me smile. And I liked the way you were so realistic.

I love it, no pretences, very realistic, and original writing style, woo!

Pretty good! I liked how you didn't make either of them attractive, since Rowling doesn't, and it's good. I don't know if you did it on purpose or not, but either way I like the formatting.

very very good. keep it up

brilliant!