that's really good...
n.n

squealing is abounding in my soul, since I have a cold and can't do it out loud. LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE@

Okay, I'm done now.




LOVE~

(for real this time.)

oh god i think my heart is actually breaking from the way you wrote this...its just so sad and yet so romantic...yes, my heart is indeed breaking. *crack*

wow. wow... wow... wow... wow...

this was just so... amazing. i cannot believe how truly spectacular this piece is. i mean, damn. i am actually tingling. i feel it running up my bones, arms, skin, heart... this was incredible. i dont even have enough orwds to end it. i mean, damn. i literally had my mouth hung open in awe. this is truly breath-taking. wow. and yes, maybe the idea is a bit cliched, you make it yours. you take this "its-the-end-of-the-worl-but-we-only-just-got-together" story and claim it as yours. that is the mark of a good writer. when they could take a cliche and totally own it. and the last lines... OH RA the last lines. they are truly amazing. i am not one to cry, actually, i havent cried in over a year. but when i read the ending, i felt those crystaline drops forming. i, sadly, couldnt cry because a promise to a friend, but now my heart hurts with such emotion and passion for this story (notice how i am not calling it a fic? way too good to be a fic) anyway, i must say that you truly are one of my favorite writers. i love your writing! i offically declare myself a seto'swhiterose-fan.

sorry to be one of those people but that is not really how you commit suicide. i am no sure if you are able to bleed out like that. in order to cut and kill yourself, instead of cutting for the reason of pain/pleasure, you need to start half-way up the forearm and cut vertically down to the wrist.

i cannot wait for the next chapter to Escape through Me. you are truly amazing.

*sniffles* aw...ya, it's clichéd...but it's also true. Isn't it funny how many cliches are real when you think about it? *cough* heh sorry. I feel so pathetic, leaving such short reviews when the one I got from you was so long..."He traversed the worn out carpet, (worn from who knew what Kaiba and Joey had been doing in this same room)", heh, I really liked that little part. It's great how even in a sad story such as this, you can add humor and it doesn't sound wrong or out of place. Not many people can do that. And I do plan on updating Eternal Darkness soon, I honestly meant to a while ago, but inspiration just wasn't there. Check it out soon though, because chapter two WILL be up...I hope...
Peace!~Jadira

w00t! i heart the yamixyugi pairing and of course this was well done, though i didn't feel particularly depressed. *shrugs* me and apocolyptic stories have an odd relationship. i do wih yami'skoi a happi birthday, but that's my birthday too... anyways, great job!

its so beautiful... wah now I have to go find a fluffy fic to make me happy again ^_^

Oh my god, yugixyami thank you so so so so much!!

i immediately loved the entire concept of this as soon as i read the summary. it seemed pretfty well-thought out, so i knew that your writing skills had only developed when i was gone. do i sound like yoh's grandad now? oh well.

poor yami. forced to live in such a big, deserted building, with practically nowhere to run. he doesn't have a place of escape until sleep, which is very saddening. this guy wants out, man! he doesn't want to even live, and the only thing keeping him alive is the one thing that can save him... same thing, right? *sweatdrops* aw, man, READ ON, READ ON!!

aw, big huggle for the pharaoh!! man, that blood paragraph... ha... my addiction for blood... mwahaha... eh, ah? ahem. ah... that was such a good description on the kissie... and Yami + Yugi + a kiss + boys = yamiskoi's happiness! yay! *reads more*

oh my god!! they died loving each other... and they were happy because they had been together! that is so... how love should be. if the world ended now, id be glad that id managed to know such a great, loving, sensative person such as yourself. even if my dreams never get accomplished... even if the world ends now... ill be happy. *wipes eyes* this is such an amazing fic. thank you so much, this has been one of the best birthday's iv ever had. love truly can be a beautiful thing. and this fic, those last few paragraphs can easily justify that. i hope YOU enjoy all the roses that come your way...

... just watch our for the thorns. but like this fic probably meant, in a symbolism pov... love cares not for thorns because it can conquer all.

ahem. sorry for the corniness there, but it needed to be said. thank you again, mizu! x

Wow... harsh yet so endearing. Good job. Those two can be such fools sometimes.

Hikari Skysong