Ah, my Prince! There you are, you lucky stiff.
It's all right about the doctor stuff! The fact alone that you tried to find information like that puts you a "cut above the rest."
update soony soon soon!
Phillippa

It's good. I like it. I can't wait to read the next chapter.

yay!! I like it. You have to update soon!

I like Mrs. Charming. What has our dear Prince (my dear Price) been up to?
Usually clever but stupid right now.
update soon! lightning soon! cheetah soon!
Phillippa

Will we see more of the people that live in her old house anytime soon? IS there going to be a ball with a fairy godmother? I like how its going so far, its diffrent from the other cinderella stories, which is good, because alot of them are all the same!

I've read cornier lines. I hope we'll be seeing more of Mr. Brooks. He seems like a really, really nice guy. And you say you've got someone to be his love interest? Hmm. I wonder who that is...I guess I'll find out when you UPDATE! Hee hee hee. Hint, hint...

Yes, I would really like it if ... the doctor met someone, and they fell in love, blah, blah, blah, just let her be like me! HEEHEE! Okay, Cinder must have been really tired to be freaked out about the doctor wanted to jump her... Alrighty, it's a nice chapter, she seems a little formal, but hey, maybe it was that way then... eh, keep it up, I'll be waiting.

It does meet my expectations. It's excellent. I really like the doctor, Mr. Brooks. He seems like a nice guy. Update soon!

The doctor sounds like quite a character. It should be interesting to see what duties Cinder's going to be helping with...and whether or not she's as unsqueamish as she thinks she is!

The photograph you haven't figured out yet--don't worry, you will! Your writer's instinct knew what it was doing when you put it in there. *wink*

Aw, shucks! (blushes)
Another very nice chapter. So what's happening with Prince?
Suddenly, as if I was struck by lightening or something, this idea came to me: the girl in the picture is Cinder. Now I feel stupid for not realizing it before. But why is she in the picture?
Hm.
update soon!
Phillippa

More, more! I love this story now so you must update soon!

Gosh, this one wasn't your best, but I'm glad you got where you wanted to be, although, I loved my idea! Good reason on why she was in funny clothes, although it is a little fuzzy. Yes, you did a great job on me figuring out who is who, such a vital thing when ignorance is bliss like playing with killer bunnies. Well, I wish you didn't have to leave for two whole weeks, but hey, it's not like we live in the same town anymore or anything... Keep it going, later.
LosaLou

Another interesting chapter. I guess Prince does grow on you . . . and on Cinder too!
please update soon! Otherwise, I may falls off the dangerous cliffie!
Phillippa

Why would I be anything other than supportive? Alright, the story was good enough, a little predictable, but I like how you planned out how she'd find a new outfit to work with the era. Oh, by the way, what is the time period, how many generations back did they go? If you could edit this chapter it'd be interesting enough. There were two guys and two girls at the beginning of this chapter and I couldn't for the life of me keep them seperate. If you would just describe what the others were wearing and then identify them as 'the man wearing the stained apron,' and such, it'd be easier for lesser minds to understand (a.k.a. me). Oh if you pulled an 'Old Magic' on how Prince is in relation to Cinder that'd be so ... interesting. Are you planning on telling how they managed to travel through time? If you do, I have a suggestion which you need not to take into account; perhaps this had happened before, another I'll just say couple managed to travel through time and they are there when Prince and Cinder arrive. How they get back would take some thought and research, and how you're going to explain that is going to be interesting. Well, I'm out and about, I'll read and review more as you update.

Okay, I've just started reading this story and while I'm not in love with it yet I like it very, very much. Cinder and Prince are very...interesting characters. I hope you'll keep going because this story can only get better.

--Anne