sweet.

My god, this is beautiful.

Wow. That almost made me cry. Awsome story. I can't belive that someone could write a story so full of emotion. Great job.

Just one word: Breathtaking. Absolutely beautiful, all the way.

THat was beautiful! :) It makes me think of the soldiers that just came back ffrom Iraq. Good on Jack fro being there! And good job in wirting this!

very nicely written

Wow. That was REALLY good. I loved it. Good Job. *hands you a gold star*

good

Thank you, that was beautiful! And you're right ... they do 'all matter'!!
I would have liked a hint as to why Billy chose Marines over Air Force; just because of his relationship with Jack. Were there family ties or was it just the uniform?
“By giving their lives in the cause of freedom, these heroes have protected and inspired all”

Great story. brought a tear to my eye.

A beautiful tribute to those who serve and have served.

That was sad. And that's a stupid thing to say, but he died, an adorable little kid died, and you made it as sad as it was meant to be.

good little fic you wrote there
keep up the good writing

susie