I love all of your NejiTen and SasuSaku fics! Your imagery is so good ("bathed in starlight"; "Sasuke's eyes were flat chips of onyx glittering with annoyance, his face fixed with a tight expression, chin tilted downwards as he glared at Neji") and the words flow like music. Reading your writing makes me feel light inside!

Awesome story!

I liked it. I think it shows the contrast between the two teams really well, how Sakura is protected, but Tenten fights on her own. And it shows how the two kunoichi react to both each other and their respective teams. It's good (As if you didn't already know that...)

I have nothing to say other than that this story was beautifully written

The contrast was VERY interesting. Great job! :)

I love how Sakura managed to redeem herself in the end & resolved all of the tension! The subtle pairings were brilliant as well!

God, this was TENSE! Great job building the tension between my two favorite men, over-of course-their girls :)

what great teamwork! wonderful writing, ti was amazing to read. :) I love these two teams, and their interactions are so funny yet serious and good.

Awesome...simply and beautifully written! I really like this one; it shows the team dynamics really well in both

Team 7 and Team Gai. You kept everyone in character too; well done! I also liked the way you described the life of a kunoichi and how shinobi aren't mindless killing machines (the good ones anyway...) and that each kill can have a real effect on their psyche. You made them more human, I liked that.

There was one thing I noticed at the end of the story: "...she linked her arm threw his and Lee’s." You used the wrong form of through. But it didn't affect the meaning of the story so it's ok.

Again awesome story! Really nice work with this one!

Saira

IC loves the way everything was put together! In a way, Naruto, Sasuke and Kakashi are Sakura's boys, as many have used this phrase. And, Neji, Lee and maybe Gai are Tenten's boys.

[: very sweet, and I love the hints of SasuSaku and NejiTen!

nice

Really good fanfic! I like how everything happened - it seemed as if it was all flowing along naturally instead of being plot-orientated.

And it's always nice to see team loyalty. .

It appears that I neglected to review a lot of your stories that I read... I'm sorry? Anyways, this story, as well, is absolutely wonderful. You are an amazing writer, and I look forward to reading more of your works.

Oh, I liked it. I don't really read much Neji/Tenten but I loved how Neji was acting; it's sweet. Same with Sasuke.

Anyways, good job as always.

Really cute, i love your writing! Keep going your way, and it will be great! Love SasuSaku :)

Love /nazaliasan , and you're added on favourite author's list -