why wouldnt you want us to read thsi story??
its hillariouse!
i love it!

Like this ending too!!

AW!! I wish you WOULD write a sequel to this fic!!Or even maybe write a story corresponding to the new play -- "Rebirth of the Two" or something like that!!

But I really wish you could write a fic...but I dont mind if you dont as well...

GOOD JOB,nonetheless!!

aw! that..that...that was just beautiful! OH!!*cries*

Love the ending!(the Chp. 15 ending,anyways..)It was just...perfect.

NICE JOB!!

omg i love this story
but i wish i never read THIS chapter:( it makes me feel so sad:| i hate sad endings:((
but yeah, ok...this story is AH-MAZING!:D

loved the story, i will read the new 1 and i like all the endings,
would hav loved to see a sequel for the second one though

hey i've been reading the story and its really great and creative and I really have to give you credit for creating this entire new world BUT I cannot get past the fact that gryffindor is spelled wrong, I don't know if you went that, cause if you did then I feel stupid hehe.
otherwise, GREAT STORY!

hey, story was absolutely positively great
although my measly little brain did not understand certain parts i still loved it. the whole concept of the tsory and the curses and all was great. kudos to you on the good work (g-d i sound like a teacher).

chow!
amorreal

I lovedd it! The story was great and everything that happened was great! I didn't like how they weren't totally freaking out once they realized they were in an imaginary land. I'd be pretty ** and scared. But I don't think it seemed rushed! All of that Draco Drama was a good addition to not make it sound like it was :).

I liked the normal ending the best compared to the two alturnative ones. Happy=Good. lol. Also, i loved how you made up a lot of the things! It made it more oringinal and fun to read :). Great Job!

xxDana (xteardropkissesx)

I like happy endings so i read this one,i, to tell u the truth did not like this ending so much, the plot it's great and the way u put ur words toguether are good but u could've been more explicit. By means of making it longer, you could have gone more in detailes u can't just fall inlove. Apart from taht The story is great! i don't wanna sound arrogant or anything but i guessed u needed this POW.

No?/ She said no! URGH! Stupid little git... anyway.. great fic.. btw..

it wasnt that humorous but it was good. when dumbledore held up a 6.0, hermione should have said, 'only 6.0?' and kissed draco again so as to get a ten. and it really does sound like there is a sequel, but i know there is not.

THE SAD ENDING WAS SO HEARTBREAKING. NO FORCED MARRIAGE!! maybe hermione should have signed hermione malfoy on the airport papers, then she would have to go back. But that would be weird. i like it the way it is.

Oh my god. I think i am going to cry. Why could she just stay one more week! my stomach is actually churning.

“I recall, a bit of trouble at the *alter*?” she asked, clearly amused.

it's supposed to be "altar", not "alter". alter actually means *change*. =)

grammar error:

Draco smirked. “Other than you coming in the middle of the night?” Hermione glared. “Okay, yeah. *You know what’s a laptop is?*”

great story so far.. =) i give it a 4.99 out of 5. it's just that the correct spelling is "gryffindor". check the books. =) other than that, the story flows well and it has a great plot.. =)

can they stay for ages, then dumbledore succeeds. like a year? and then they stay fairly secret?

I like this story... hehehehe