Reviews for Twisted Reality

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DayDreamer9 2008-10-10 ch 11,	abuseI feel mega bad for the Alter Lyoko Gang :( I hope that they're happy now... But good story ^^
The Mad shoe1 2008-10-07 ch 11,	abuseAwsome ending to a awsome story.
The Golden Hat 2008-10-07 ch 11, anon.	abuseAT LAST! I have waited SO LONG for you to finish this! Your stories are always fascinating Star, but this one is really amazing. Your portratal of an alternate, and undeniably dark version of Lyoko is pretty cool, and I enjoyed how you handled the grim war-torn versions of our favorite charactors. I hope that you start writing more regularly now, you have such intricate and well-developed stories. I hope that you do indeed write a sequel, this was a great story.
Tomoyo-chan284 2008-06-15 ch 10,	abuseI figured out the code! It's a numerical substitution of the names right? I'm so happy I figured it out. Please load the next chapter soon! I will be waiting. :)
The Mad shoe1 2008-02-03 ch 10,	abuseGreat fic, i loved the idea of an evil Jeremie and a more bitter and sterner Aelita having this love/hate relationship.
Amber Skye 2007-09-20 ch 10,	abuseWhoo! So much to mention. Okay, first of all, this part: "Hey Einstein!" Ulrich yelled... "Did I not imply my hatred of that nickname?!" Alter Jeremie hissed... ROFL! That was so hilarious, I'm not quite sure why, but it was. I really did laugh out loud. Okay, but then like two seconds later came this part: The images were lessening now, their cycle nearly complete, and yet she didn't move. "Aelita?" Against her will, her head raised to meet his eyes. "Daddy?" ~SNIFFLE!~ Wah! That one line, it's so sad! So you actually had me laughing one minute and crying the next. I love it when writers mess with my emotions like that, you evil fiend, you. Bwaa ha ha!! Loved it when Xana dumped Jeremie. That was awesome, I wasn't a bit surprised. I really liked your Xana all throughout this, he was very tolerant, very matter-of-fact. Logical and calm. An interesting take on him, I think. It worked really well. And then the exchange between Jeremie and Xana, right before the deletion wave hit! HA!! That was sweet! Xana thinks he's still in control, thinks he's gonna walk away without a scratch, but crazy Jeremie had a backup plan... I liked the lines there, 'backstabbing friend,' and 'Fare thee well, fool.' And I can't believe you managed to write an entire extra chapter and STILL keep me wondering if they switched the two Yumis in time. Very, very nice work, that cliffhanger is AWESOME. As usual, I look forward to the next chapter!
Amber Skye 2007-09-20 ch 9,	abuseDid I ever read this chapter? Or leave a review? Dang, was I an entire chapter behind? Anyways, pretty cool. I liked Jeremie/Xana, he's nice and insane and malicious. HA, trying to scare us into thinking that the real Yumi is going to die, eh? Well, I figure they're about to transport the Alter back to her plane of existence; they'll get switched again just in time! Course, I could be wrong. Boy, would that be cool if I were... C=
bombsauce24 2007-09-19 ch 10,	abuseum i dont want to sound stupid, but what is the code?
bombsauce24 2007-09-19 ch 1,	abusevery very addicting. also very well written. humorous:D I love it! greatly anticipating the next chapter!! update soon!
Astrianna 2007-09-19 ch 10,	abuseso it took me about a week but i figured out the code. Original. No, really, i like it. I expected something more evil-sounding when you said it actually meant something. Anyway, as always for this story, great chapter, absolutely EVIL cliffhanger (do you get mock death-threats for those?) and please update soon! you get cookies if you update soon! (how's that for incentive)
DayDreamer9 2007-09-16 ch 10,	abuseI feel bad for Alter Jeremie and Alter Aelita, I think that he really did love her, but the hatred he felt for everyone else who scorned him just overpowered him in the end. I'm not clear on the code Alter Aelita was giving out...then again...do I WANT to know? "shudders" Please tell me that nobody dies, I already feel slightly depressed cuz Alter Aelita is gone (I say slightly cuz I have this strange feeling that she isn't totally dead), and the rumors floating around about Season 4's ending isn't doing me any good. PLEASE hurry up and update this soon! T_T
zb earth 2007-09-16 ch 10,	abusesweet u updated i love it more soon please
Cybra 2007-09-14 ch 10,	abuseAnd this story continues to just blow me away. Fantastic job, Flying Star!
LDChaosBdon 2007-09-14 ch 10, anon.	abuseAwesome story. But, I'm kinda confused with the code. I know what it is, but Im not sure how you got it.
MonPetitLoupDeMort 2007-09-14 ch 10,	abuseHi! I've been reading your story, and I've really enjoyed it. It is very well done, and the depth is astounding. I can't wait for the final chaper. Ps. Re. Codes 9,20...9,19...1...12,9,19,20...15,6,...3,8,1,18,1,3,20,5,18...14,1,13,5,19...1,14,4...12,25,15,11,15...9,14...14,21,13,5,18,9,3,1,12...3,15,4,5...22,5,18,25...3,15,15,12... Pps. It took me forever to figure out the code, but I went back to last chapter and it just clicked. Thanks again for the great story and puzzle.

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