you have a great story. but first before starting my review pls forgive my grammar.

ok even the story has a sad ending its still beautiful! if i am you i will love being me coz not everybody can do stories as beautiful as what you have done. whats more making a sad sory but still it turns great! well i guess you get my point. em right? well thats for now candle light chaos! again its such a woderful sotry and i love it!