I want a paper crane like that! Good job on writing this, I like your writing style. ^_^

~Peeka-chan

Please update this wonderful story! I want to see what happens next!

It's very interesting, but somehow I'm confused as to the pairing. Seems like both Kaien and Byakuya are interested... Hm. Update soon!

Wow...

This is wonderful. I love it!

I'm eager to see what happens next.

Update when you can,

~ Se-chan

Well, this fic has certainly caught my attention. I look forward to future chapters. ^^

E this story just keeps getting better. I love how you've captured the subtlety of Byakuya's personality!

You write so wonderfully, it's almost breathtaking as if someone's inking out this scrolling tapestry of imense awe-inspiring beauty with every paragraph. I truly love the idea you have behind this story and I'm interested to see where it will go next. Please update soon!

Holy cow this is good dame good! I wonder if your setting it up for the 2 friends to fight over her?

Love love love this Keep going!

This is good!

OMG what aa AwESOMe FanFic ,I Love Byakuya! Oh great Writer ,Plz Write A third Chapter! ^^

Oh, I would love for you to write more of this. It's absolutely masterful.

This sounds like a reall intriguing idea, I like how you have protayed Hisana and her situation up to meeting Byakuya. It was very in touch with her emotions. Good luck with chapter three!

awesome fanfic...! please, please update soon. you're doing really great! ja, ne!

Lovely fic. Can't wait to see more.

where is the rest of it?
im dying here because of curiosity.

continue it!
:)