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robinpen
2008-04-05
ch 6, anon.
abuseIt seemed that with the accompany of his lover,Raistlin had become
stronger than he had been in the original story.
With love and understanding between each other,they both looked charming;but without the hatred and jealousy and those dark side of the charactor,it feels a bit strange as well.After all,Raistlin is a lovely bad man who always follows his own will.
Thanks for the author to write down the wonderful series.(I doubt that if I had given my words proper since I'm so clumsy at writing in English.)
La Comtesse de Cagliostro
2007-04-22
ch 6,
abuseAs I told you when I reviewed the Ice and Steel, I am captivated. I´m still reading, as I have been for hours. Apparently, I have no life.

Oh, well. I shall continue to read your stories. They are more interesting than the real life, anyway.
Tiernan Hunter
2007-03-20
ch 6,
abusejust as good as the rest of ur stories. i like the whole tablet thing, that was really cool. u also have great taste in music, i like how u put a verse at the beginning of each chapter. great job!
TheDeathChamber
2007-03-17
ch 6,
abuseI'm loving it. Must read more!
Berylia-Crystalia
2006-12-29
ch 6,
abuseI almost thought this chapter would end with our two mages being captured and led North toward Lord Ariakas. Well, I want to know what is going to happen know so here I go.
Thank you so much for writing this story !
Berylia-Crystalia
2006-12-29
ch 5,
abuseAgh ! So sweet I can't stop smiling even if my eyes are begging for mercy and sleep, I must continue.
Berylia-Crystalia
2006-12-29
ch 4,
abuseThe day of two mage lovers is so quiet and relaxing : visiting ruins, discovering old spells, running away from gobelins, taking tea, making love, memorizing spells, not always in this order though. I'm looking forward next chapter as always.
Berylia-Crystalia
2006-12-29
ch 3,
abuseRaistlin and Dalamar are too cute for my poor heart to bear ! But I'm quite afraid of what our two lovers will find at the end of this dark passage.
Berylia-Crystalia
2006-12-29
ch 2,
abuseWell, this story begins with a great lot of mysteries ! I love it !
kenderling
2005-08-29
ch 6,
abuseThis was a nice little book (section, chapter?) in your overall story. I'm really liking where the story is going, and am interested in where it'll take me next. (wow... it must be late... this is a crap review) Um... at any rate, I am looking forward to your next one (which is probably already up by now) Good job.
Decollage
2005-07-05
ch 6,
abuseVery nice! I especailly like how Raistlin pulled that off- that was cool. Even though he didn't train to be a battle mage in the Baron's army, like it followed in the books.
Redemption-Rank5
2005-07-05
ch 6,
abuseAwesome story! I can hardly wait for the next one!
The reason I haven't got any stories on here, is because I've got to write 14 for a competition... So far I've done three.
BHS
2005-07-04
ch 6, anon.
abuseHi. I'd sign in, but I'm afraid it won't let me review if I do...Sorry I haven't been reviewing lately, but my computer's being stupid...-_-0 Yeah. Anyway, the last two chapters have been really great. I love them. You have a real talent for this. ^^ I just love your writing, and I wish I was half as good as you are. I hope you post the sequel soon, 'cause I can't wait!

~Still your loyal admirer~
BHS
Raistlin/Dalamar fangirl
2005-07-03
ch 6, anon.
abuseAs much as I adore this story, it raises some interesting questions in mind. How is it that we always see Raistlin studying spells and the such, but not Dalamar? True, Dalamar hasn't passed his test yet, but I would have thought that he'd take every opportunity to grasp more spells in anticipation of the day that he finally gets invited.
Lady Hally
2005-06-30
ch 5,
abuseHi! I’m so glad to hear that Dal has started getting rid of his oh-so-bad dreams! And I want to ask you one question: will you write about events of “Brothers in arms”, or about how Raistlin has become a dark mage? Or “Engraven” will be the last story? I’d not want to hear it, but it’s your story, and you’re the one who knows better. Thanks for the perfect chapter and bye.
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