This is a wonderful and full story about the heretics. One of my favorites.

The dialogues were somewhat confusing. Spifftacualr fic.

Good fic. Though it would have been easier if you sorta pointed out who spoke what in the dialogue, other than that I liked the story. I found Homura to be the most intriguing and interesting character in Gensomaden. He really did live a sad existence. I don't think I would have mind if the creators of Saiyuki carried his character on a bit longer.

Great fic. I definitely approve of the new writing style, though it could take a bit of thought to tell who was talking.

Also, though it doesn't really have to do with this fic... It might actually be being near humans that cause heretical beings to die. This is a theory based on the fact that Goku, though imprisonned on the lower world, never actually started to age until Sanzo took him out of the cave.

Oh, the Goku-Homura dialog was very cute. Great job and keep writing fanfics! Update "Perfect World!"

*thumbs up* It's awesome!