Favorite quote: "...the man within the warrior gave in." Just.../perfect/ for Butler; loved it. I also got shivers for the look in Artemis's eyes right before that, when even Butler couldn't see him as a "boy." Very nice.

Other than that, lots of little moments that got me all a grinnin'; altogether a great peice. Oh, and yeah...the final line was great too. Romance! -swoons-

Anyway! G/j, and my thanks to you for posting.

::Moonstar::

That was awesome! I love it! Great job! ^-^

THEY ARE BOTH GAY?!?!WTF!

BUTLER IS A GAY PERVERT?!?!?!?!?! WTF!

That was. FANTASTIC! I could visualize every single step. Waltzing is very easy, but hard when your partner has two left feet.

beautiful

I LUV it!

Holy cow

aah... ah!ah!ah!

sorry. i just orgasmed.

nice work.

INCREDIBLE!!~!

Underbara historier, härlig prosa och kul att hitta ytterligare en svensk som delar detta lite speciella intresse. :) Hoppas du skriver mer snart, i synnerhet Artemis/Butler då detta är en sorgligt underrepresenterad paring/fandom inom slashen.

MVH
/Ms Samy

Squee!

This story left me squealing and writhing... and I have a big dumb smile on my face that just won't go away. Normally fluffy stuff just makes me sick but this was so sweet and wonderful! Finding this little treasure buried under so many terrible Artemis/Butler fics on FFN really made my day!

Write more Artemis/Butler stuff! Lots of Love!

Lady Myotismon

That was so preety! Excelently well written, I can see your own style shining through it, with enough witty comments to match up to the Authors own style. Fantastic!

And well written Slash. Your Artemis is perhaps a tad vulnerable, but I supose it would be nessacary for the sake of the plot... It was very believeable vulnerability though, and I could actually see Artemis getting his knickers in a twist over such things.

Immense.

more

*sigh*
how cute... I love your style of writing, I can imagine all what happened there.
aw, totally cute