great story so i can't wait for the next one and please update soon and keep writing its really great.

My guess is that mysterious lady may be one of Harry's eventual kids. No actually that the traitor she speaks about would be one of Harry's kids.

I have not read ahead, but I'm guessing this new Dark Lord is Harry. Back in time Harry. I'm guessing new Harry will only have Tonks to rely on to be good and stay in the light.

And great play with the Star Wars deal. Finally someone who gets it. I'm writing a similar one myself.

good fic

i dont mean to sound insulting but that was fairly predictable among 3 guesses i had

like the way the story went and am heading for the sequl

I'm sorry, but I can't read this. I don't mean to offend you but I find the writing to unrealistic. No one speaks in full sentences all the time.

cool!

GREAT story!! It is really good - very original!! I have never read one like this before, so, I say, once again, GREAT!! Thanks, and I hope to read your sequel soon!

Interesting idea and I enjoyed reading this. Thanks for writing.

good chapter

good start poor harry

ok the merger thing was quite a nice idea. However hows lilly taking the news that her lover\son had switched from shagging her to needing his nappy changed overnight? So lily has waited for harrys balls to drop again and the first thing on his mind was to pick up with his old flame from 50 years ago? i cant wait for that the christmas cards at xmas! to dad/son happy xmas from dad/son (and Aunty Tonks and step mom tonks)
its a shame mate really cause you have some nice ideas and i didnt intend to be rude as you have put the effort in writing the story. However the most important thing with a timeline fic is to preplan the storyline and timescale beforehand. Harrys character was turning nicely dark and manipulative without all the incest ** man which discredited the story overall

dude, have you taken acid before planning this story? Bella, cissy ok thats workable and believable even. BUT HARRY ** HIS MOM? WTF Man? How the ** can he be his own dad? Why dont you skip another generation and get him to ** dumbledore then he can be his own great great grandfather too!
This story started quite well, but either substance abuse or a twisted sense of reality got in the way of a half decent story.
Ok, look at it from another point of view and try and make the characters more than 1 dimensional - Regardless of harrys ** up life and WHATEVER dark powers he learns - at no time, not ever, ever is an essentially unloved lonely angry mixed up kid suddenly going to think "m... im so angry at my life and dumbledore ect for making me miss out on having parents that i think im going to go back in time repeatedly ** my mom, become my own dad and my school rivals dad. " oh and incidently if he marries tonks he will have also be an Uncle to draco as well as his dad. WTF! ARE YOU ON! hopefully drugs and your not a yockel called cleatus or something.

Harry remained lying at the edge of his bed, and was still unconscious, as a soft popping sound echoed in the room. “We have to help him or he will die!” A man said as he cast a levitating spell on Harry to get him into his bed. He then started to cast healing spells on Harry trying to heal his wounds. “Give him the potion, he has lost a lot of blood.”
On the bed.off the bed...

A person dressed in red robes with a golden mask steps forward and attempted to give Harry the potion and after a few seconds the person managed to give him the potion. “Milord why are we saving him, if we are planning to abduct him later?” A female voice asked as she finished giving him the potion.
PICK A TENSE **!