I am not a N/S shipper but I have to say I love this story. Love all the emotions you captured and describe.

JENNIFER
WARRICK/SARA SHIPPER

I love the last line. Absolutely amazing - I don't even know what else to say (one of the best stories I have read in a long time).

A great ending to a great story!

Wonderful. I loved it. :)

Thank goodness it was a happy ending you had me worried.. What a lovely story!

This just really made my day, thank you for the wonderful ending. Sad, but absolutely wonderful. Although for the first half of the chapter I was like: 'No! You can't kill her!' lol.

My favourite part of the chapter is this line: "He asked me why I couldn't do this one thing for Sara, he asked if I couldn't just think of her instead of myself, just for this one time. I answered that it was too late to start doing things for her." It says so much in just a few words about Sara and Grissom. And I loved Brass's thoughts on how Sara would make a good mother, because I've always had my doubts but that chapter was incredibly convincing.

I hope you're really proud and happy with this story, it's fantastic and I've loved every moment even though it made me want to cry lots :P

Great ending. Enjoyed the story and look forward to others. Audra

You had me worried there for a bit - I thought it was someone's funeral at first! Anyway, it was a great ending, and a great fic. I loved it, of course, as always!

Nice ending. At first, I was confused about the church but then you explained yourself so no worries. NS rules! Hope you continue writing great Snickers fiction.

I don't know if i am just really tired or what, but at first I thought Sara was dead! Man I need some sleep! Well Done! I really enjoyed this story!

Thanks for updating quickly. I would have gone nuts waiting to see what happened next if you hadn't. This fic was really good. I am looking forward to reading more of your fics.
~Jackie~

Whew. I was worried there. Good job. I love that you ended with Grissom's regret. Sometimes I dislike Gil just a bit, and your ending suited me perfectly.

I also liked the part from Brass and Warrick. The idea of this story from many POV's was a good one.

aw so sad. please update soon

Good chapters. Hope you get the next one up in a couple of days or I won't be able to find out what happened for a week and a half. Got to know if they're okay or what! Look for more soon, please. Audra

Wow! The last sentence is amazing. And so's the rest of it.