...turned away from Fakir and stepped into the water...

...and turned into a magical ballerina princess and danced with the knight she loved. The end.

now that was worth it. lol

(love your writing in other words)

Wow, so good and so heartbreaking...and yet, a good sort of bittersweet, not the type where the bitter overpowers the sweet.

Lovely, subtle, and touching. Masterful blend of melancholy regret and hope. Better yet, it explains why Fakir never said anything - which always bugged me in the anime.

DAMMIT, RASHAKA.

(this is not my first time reading this - I think I've read it so many times and had so many reactions that the above *points* is the only one that fits anymore.)

I love that this is so sparse, I love that there's zero dialogue when there's so much to say, but I hate you for making me actually feel like it'd be okay even if he never wrote her back into a girl. If that's what you were aiming for, then you're just cruel. (

*f-faves, I have no willpower*

The ending was so bitterwseet in the series, and I felt that it needed to save some time for Fakir and Ahiro to say (or not say) their last goodbyes. Thanks for this.

Very good

;-;...

So kawaii! .

It's cute and sad.

It's difficult for me to see how the "no regrets" and the so much things she wanted to say go together. I understand that she wants to live by her true form, but...

If Fakir could talk the animal language, it would already be much better. After all, Drosselmeyer could.

short and sweet! Great job!

that show was goddamn depressing!,and so is this one!...and i just love both!