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tova77f 2005-07-05 ch 12,	abuseWhat a great ending...you had me on the edge of my seat. I was hoping for a happy ending, but this seems so much more realistic, something I definitely could see happening in real life. I hope you continue to write more Garret fics...you've done a wonderful job with this one.
jtbwriter 2005-07-04 ch 12,	abuseThat is so sad. Ruin is the word for what Garret faced. This was a very real, moving story. Two adults who maybe loved too well and too wrongly. You made "Audrey" come alive-thanks for giving us a great fic! Look forward to your next work!
jtbwriter 2005-07-04 ch 11,	abuseThat is hard...obviously Garret is being blamed and he's going to have to give Audrey up for both their sakes. The real tragedy is that he and Audrey did not cause the deaths...but their guilt is driving them both. Very real-thanks for a great update! Now what?:)
tova77f 2005-07-04 ch 10,	abuseWow...that was intense. I didn't expect the story to take this kind of twist. I feel for the two of them and hope that something good comes out of this in the end. You've captured their emotions perfectly. Look forward to more.
jtbwriter 2005-07-03 ch 10,	abuseThat was awful-poor Audrey and Garret... Yes, she was unfaithful, but she didn't make that guy get drunk-drive drunk and murder a child... Waste is right-what a vivid picture this makes! Thanks for the update-really riveting! Now what?:)
jtbwriter 2005-07-03 ch 9,	abuseThat is a heartbreaker-Garret can't compete with a "great" man-Audrey can't possibly leave the man. AND-on top of that-Garret has to worry about the implications of an affair. What a sad one-good update-thanks! Now what?:)
jtbwriter 2005-06-23 ch 8,	abuseThat's hurtful-very honest and to be honest-I didn't see it coming. Garret fell in love but is so insecure about his place in Audrey's life-a good human reaction and very IC! Thanks for the quick update-and a good morning eyeopener! Now what??:)
jtbwriter 2005-06-22 ch 7,	abuseThis is so good-very real with the feelings of guilt and desire that Garret has-but good! I like that Audrey seems to feel the same way-no false will I/won't I! Thanks for the great update-now what?:)
tova77f 2005-06-12 ch 6,	abuseI hope you update soon because I can't wait to see where this is going to go. I love this story and look forward to reading more.
jtbwriter 2005-06-10 ch 6,	abuseGreat story-break my heart now! Poor Garret-he knows how to pick em'-Audrey's perfect for him-this is not going to end happy! You did a great job on nailing his loneliness and on focusing on how everything led to this! Thanks for the update-now what?:)
garretelliot 2005-06-10 ch 6,	abuseEverybody out there is either on vacation or asleep, I don't understand why you aren't getting more reviews. This is the one of the best stories on the site right now. As always, your characterizations are amazingly tight and accurate. The way you handled the two of them coming together (which could have been very cheap and taudry) was beautiful and I could feel the inevitablity you were trying to convey. It felt almost like watching an avalanche, you can't stop it or divert it, only stand and watch it slide down faster and faster. I cannot wait for the next chapter, I truly expected to see Audrey on A&E last night. Please update soon
MartinaCruz 2005-06-09 ch 5,	abuseVery well written i really like this story! Cant wait for more!
garretelliot 2005-06-03 ch 5,	abuseOH BOY! Somethings changed in their relationship and I can't wait for the next update. I am completely enamoured of this story and I just wish I'd written it. This stuff is pure gold, hon. Please update soon.
garretelliot 2005-06-03 ch 4,	abuse'She turned seven'. I love that line. I promised myself that I would review each chapter individually, so that I could savor each one like a fine wine and may I say this is a particularly wonderful and heady vintage. I usually encourage people to go slow and buld up to the payoff but in the case of this story, I find myself wishing it were going faster so that I can have more. You charaterizations are still as beautiful and spot on as ever while still being fresh and inventive. I cannot wait for the next chapter which I'm going to read now.
collegesweetheart 2005-06-02 ch 5,	abuseWow. this is really great. I agree with your first reviewer, you have all of the characters down pat! congrats. You deserve to have a lot more than just a couple of reviews! keep it up, --Cass.

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