Not bad... for a first. OK fine! It's good. Keep it coming kid.

So dark. Good job. One of the scenes in Revenge of the Sith that really got me was exactly this one - the twelve-year-old Jedi (is Zett really his name?) fighting the clones. I was cheering for him so hard. Man, Anakin is evil!

Oh ... wow. This one really packs a punch (and I mean that as a compliment) It's powerful stuff, and what an ending! My only request would be for a little more description - other than that, fantastic. Keep writing!

This is so sad... but well written... but very sad indeed... but you kind of helped me making peace with the scene of the movie I hated the most...

i liked this.very good :),and the end line wrapped it up nice

wow

not bad keep on writing. but, u need more description. show not tell. descrobe what happens during fighting parts, oh and zett is only 10 according to
good bye!

That was really, really good. The way you protrayed the children was espeically touching. They where the ones that Anikin betrayed the most becuase they trusted him the most. Thanks for writing this great story.

Wow, this is your first fanfic? Awesome.

Okay...

very good and sad. I loved it.

I've been looking around for more fics dealing with the siege on the Temple, especially since we see so little of it in the movie, so I'm glad I found yours!

Very nicely written, especially using Zett, who was actually played by Lucas' son (I think).

Also liked the line at the end at how Anakin massacred the Tusken Raider village.

Hope to read more!

This is a precious story, i really loved it. just adorable, heartbreaking but true!