I understood the Monty Python referance. (Monty Python Rox!)

But my favorite part would be this one:

"Eike's cellphone rings in chapter 8-

Eike: Hello?

Hugo: WASAP?

Eike: WASAAP?

Hugo: Yo! Hom pick up the phone!

Hom: WASAP?"

LMAO!

*Doesn't know whether to cry or laugh...* bu-ju-chu-WHY? Lol. Me likey! Pleas write more. Or I may have to tell Hume-chan on you!

SQUE! BRILLIANT! LOL GIGGLEFEST! By the way, your going to get smashed for doing a play format! Loved it though. Hope you don't SQUE!

Dude, that was awesome! I haven't finished the game yet, but I still love this!

I like reading stupid things at 3:30 am. heehee!

ROFLMFAO!

WOOT! HOMUN in a school grl uniform and playboy. lol. great job. keep up the good work

omg that was so funny. i loved the refrence to scary movie. that was hilarious.

Not too bad. Make it even stupider, and I'll come back... maybe.

(Dante walks into the room) Dante: You said you were coming back soon!

Me: (staringathiminwaysishouldnt) I am... I am.

Ignore that0_0. You didn't see anything!

Madagascar Pengiuns: That's our line!

On a sadder note, the Pengiuns were later thrown into the underworld by Dante, because he believed that that was what was taking me so long.

Also, the story was good... GOOD! _

hahaha - that was mad! Keep it up (homunculus...in school girl outfit...someone was gonna write it sooner or later!)

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It rocks. I especially like Hom-chan in a school girl outfit! XD lmao! I was waiting for that to go take a wrong turn and invole Eike in a very sexual way. X3 Thank god it didn't! (Though it would've been funny, heh!) Anyway, good! Please write more! :D

It was cute, in a bizarre and funny way.

I like.."want to see the picture?"

and then...?

very odd, I liked it.

x

Mort