Dude, what amazes me is not that you're this good a writer, as some of the best writers in the world only do fanfiction, but the fact that you've actually managed to spawn so many people creating spin-off fics as well. I'm honestly impressed, and it takes a lot to impress me. I apologize for any typos, the iPhone dictionary sucks.

nice work, keep it up...whenever this and the original stories are updated. there are still those that read your stories. likewise, keep up the work.

Since you e-mails kaput!, when will you update "Second Chances" and your website?

dennisud

I hope this will get to you cause I can't see any onther way of doing it. It seems that Lord Archive's Librum is down. I get a 403 (Access Forbidden) Error when I try and enter. Have you changed the URLs? Or perhaps there's a problem with either the site or the server?

Eitehr way it's down.

You updated! YAY

This is a great chapter. I looked for it on your own site, but I could not find it at Lord Archive's Librum...

I especially liked how you used teh japanese system of justice instead of the american system. And while I might question your use of Shakkoumon as Iori's perfection form, it is your perogative as the author to do whatever you want. I'm a bit surprised that Sayuri got her crest so quickly, and I wonder what Yume's crest is as well. If Iori's is Justice, and Sayuri's is Responsibility, what trials are in store for Yume?

YAY! You came back to ff.net! I'm so glad! Can I be your beta for this fic and Red Digivice Diairies, because I don't have the Internet, and can't visit Mediamier.org at school?
Anyway, this fic is as good as your hard-core nc 17 stuff, which has influenced one of my Star Trek fanfics. My email is , if you want to contact me...and I hope you do!

Glad to see you're back here posting, especially with The One That Started It All For Those Who Are Too Young To Read NC-17 Fics (namely, me, at a near-17).
This is the second time I read this and it's still excellent no matter what. 'Course, now I understand a little more about Carter and Kylie from reading some of the other fics in this universe. Have to tell you though, the couch thing was priceless. And Yuri's scene reminds me of something very similar in _The Whole Nine Yards_, one of my guilty pleasures from the total corruption my school's movie club put me through. (If you've seen the movie, you know what scene I'm talking about). I'm a little confused on the details of the New York team mainly because no one's gotten around to writing their story yet. But I will be sure to read it once someone does!
I can't wait to see what happens with the other Dark Seed kids. I've been practically messing myself with excitement since I started reading this. You can bet I'll be throwing myself at the next chapter when it comes. Till then!
And P.S.: Pushing the PG-13 rating is fun. I should know after what I did in my last PG-13 fic...

Well after reading this a second time I realize that I really want to know more about what is going on. The dark seed children are planning untold mahem and Sakura should have known better than to taunt the child of light annd I shudder to think of what kind of power her son has (If Kari had ended up with Daisuke instead of Takeru the same problem would have arised since MIracles is in the same class as Light and Hope). Well Magnadramon is still accesable if they piss Hikari off so that's a good trump card to have, I hope Yamato doesn't die his life kinda sucks already so it would be like kicking a three legged dog. Well I can't wait to see where you go with this when oyu continue it; good luck and great inspiration

this, like all your work, is excellent. i know you must get this alot, but could you pleaaase update your site more? and i really like the london dairies piece, it'l be fun to see how they got to the point in reception. C'ya

I know the reason that TK is the ninth digidestend.(singsong voice) It is because of Akiyama Ryo. He was the first Chosen the one who fought Milliniumon. Think wonderswan.

I'm a great fan of yours fics but the only problems I have is that you write and post your fics every month or even several months so please can you try to writing and posting your fics every week or even two or three weeks if your busy or lazy. KEEP ON WRITING!

So was that a dream Sayuri had or was it real? It was a good chapter, anyway.

Whoa... dark... Before I knew it was a dream, I was like "Oh my god! He killed Takeru and Yamato and wounded Iori! You bastard!" Then I saw that it was only a dream, and was like "whoa..." So Archnemon's in here? Cool. Anyway, can't wait for the next chapter.

Enjoyed the series so far. Bring on the Dark Chosen. (Sorry, for some reason, I can't get a review in to Ch. 15). Not exactly the most original idea (my D-Weapon Masters and Mirror, Mirror by 7 of 11 had somewhat of that concept), but it works.