Very interseting take on this. I honestly never thought much about how Rhade felt during that ep. I was thinking more about Beka. But yeah, something like great grand-daddyX100 letting you beat the poo outa' him would have that affect on a man. I liked it, you made me tear up...and I don't do that so easily anymore. Great fic!

Interesting gap filler. I liked it alot, but I do think you could've cut a few things out...like mentioning the "Progenitor" too much.

Other than that, I enjoyed it. Keep it up!

--Christina