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| loverofteddy 2008-02-23 ch 3, | abuseGoos story!! |
| Crowded Mind 2006-01-30 ch 3, | abusesequil, sequil, sequil! That was a great story, very cute too and i would love to read more! |
| Liana-Elfgirl 2005-12-16 ch 3, | abusesequel pleas. If there is no sequel I WILL send a Rancor after you. SEQUAL |
| Angel Sanada Sekhmet Date 2005-11-17 ch 3, | abuseI DO! I want see what happen afterwards. |
| silverkitcat 2005-03-23 ch 3, | abuseSequal! |
| blitz 2004-10-19 ch 3, anon. | abusekeep wrighting i love this story |
| Empress Sarah-sama 2002-07-27 ch 3, anon. | abuseAwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww.............. |
| Tidmag 2002-04-01 ch 3, | abuseWow, but what happens to Vader? Does Luke and Leia learn about their shared blood? I mean they do have hospitals and such and news could leak to them. Well. Great job! Have you read SJ's Star Wars stuff? Totally awesome. Same kinda feel. Luke has this . . . . . |
| Gen Raid 2002-02-04 ch 3, anon. | abuseSequel would be good. |
| jodi 2002-02-02 ch 1, anon. | abuseawesome story! i hope u write more soon! im curious!!!!! |
| Cutlass317 2001-12-17 ch 3, | abuseAww, that was so sweet! Good job, little Luke is so cute! ^_^ Keep on writing! |
| chloeLinn 2001-12-03 ch 3, anon. | abuseAWESOME!!! really cool story! I hope you get more chapters out soon! I dying to know what happens next!!! |
| Blade Raider 2001-09-24 ch 3, | abuseGood. A little short. You eloborated a lot more, but still good. |
| chloe 2001-09-15 ch 3, anon. | abuseAwesome!!! Wizard!!! Fantabualse!!! (dont check the spelling on that last word, itll make my spelling look REAL bad) I have always wondered if there were any fanfics were Vader switched back to the light side after finding out about Luke, or Leia, or both. I think it's cool you did one, and it turned out great. -SEE YA- out and over houston |
| Atreyu Nukus 2001-05-26 ch 3, anon. | abuseTwinnie, Hello, Okay I have a few comments on your VERY good story. (1.) The story felt like it should have been a little more detailed and have more information. (2.) There were a few miss spelled words. (3.) And in some parts it was a little confusing. But it was still a good story. Thank for taking the time to read my review and keep the storys coming, sign Atreyu |