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| Black Sorceress 2007-04-12 ch 5, | abuseWoah. That. Was. Amazing. Wow! |
| yodudes5 2006-02-15 ch 1, | abusehi I love this story! |
| forti 2005-12-12 ch 5, anon. | abuseever going to continue?... |
| fortuna 2005-11-01 ch 5, anon. | abuseuh, it's been several months now...ever gonna update? ;_; |
| Ice Dragon3 2005-08-14 ch 5, | abuseI loved it. It was just emotion and...wow. There's no other way to describe it. XD I found a couple grammer mistakes in here, but other than that your story flowed very well. I like how you made the ending more of a beginning. :) |
| Fortuna 2005-08-10 ch 5, anon. | abuseare you EVER going to update? ;_; |
| fashes 2005-08-03 ch 5, | abuseThis hurt. Was horribly painful. I ached and my heart clenched with the agony of the unrequited love. Anakin's detremination to resolve the chasm between them. I totally cherish this. |
| darth_mel 2005-07-24 ch 5, anon. | abuseAmazing ending! Maybe you could write a sequel?... |
| grasshopperon 2005-07-15 ch 1, | abuseWOW! really fantastic! you capture Obi-Wan and Anakin wonderfully. keep up the good work! |
| Laurel Tree 2005-07-09 ch 5, | abuseI loved it! Especially Obi-wan's guilt- it was perfectly in character! Well done! |
| Catcher-in-the-Rye 2005-07-07 ch 5, | abuseLove the story; is there more? |
| EternusLemures 2005-07-07 ch 5, | abuseWhoa...intense. Much likey for the emotional though. if this makes no sense, blame it on not sleeping for over thirty six hours... ~EL |
| insanemarionette 2005-07-03 ch 5, | abusewait, does this mean the story is over? aw please write more! PLEASE! i loved this one, espec. the last chapter for the obvious reasons. |
| LaMSaErArNier 2005-07-02 ch 5, | abuse**...that was AMAZING! I just read through the entire thing im about ten minutes and I'm stunned. Excellent job! |
| NatalieakaGothVamp 2005-06-28 ch 5, | abuseWow. This was very beautiful. Your writing is exquisite |