aw! that is so sweet! I love it!

That was a beautiful image of Grissom, through the years, as a loving father and grandfather. I like your writing.

Hey !! This is one of the sweetest story I've ever red , really beautifully written .Thank you :-D

Awesome story!

Aw, this was so sweet. I love stories depicting Grissom as a father - I know he'd be a good one.

I love the story, it's very beautifully written.
I also think that it's nice that the mother isn't mentioned, since it can make everyone happy.

I wanted to review this so much earlier, but the site was acting up...

Anyway, I thought this was absolutely beautiful and perfect. I loved it! Amazing job!