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Tiongy5
2009-12-06 . chapter 2
Oh, that did make me chuckle. Can't wait to read the rest!
Stargirl
2009-11-06 . chapter 13
Oh, my god, BEST fanfic I've ever read! PERFECT story.
LadySol
2009-09-19 . chapter 2
Yo, I loved the prank, maybe it is childish of me but I laughed for at least a minute. oh well.
Katamabob
2009-08-29 . chapter 13
This was amazing! Draco was so hilariously cruel! And I loved his pen pal. She was brilliant. And I'm really glad that Draco admitted his feelings for Hermione first, because he can't have it all his own way, now can he? ^_^
I really really enjoyed this, for the hilarity and the romance. It's utterly fantabulous! My only regret is that I'd really like to read the Russian/American girl's reply! It'd probably be pretty scathing and funny...
Kate
Katie - Lyn Della Robia
2009-08-12 . chapter 13
HEHEHE! *giggles for ten minutes straight*
Katie - Lyn Della Robia
2009-08-11 . chapter 8
“Did she call me retarded?"

loved that! absolutely LOVED that!
Katie - Lyn Della Robia
2009-08-11 . chapter 4
Giggle, giggle, giggle!
Katie - Lyn Della Robia
2009-08-11 . chapter 2
*sniggers uncontrolably*
Katie - Lyn Della Robia
2009-08-11 . chapter 1
*GASP!* Draco watches Muggle T.V.!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!
Miss Hydrangea
2009-07-22 . chapter 6
The ending lines tied up the chapter very well, haha.
Miss Hydrangea
2009-07-22 . chapter 4
This was funny, even when convenient. Some of the aspects of this chapter reminded me of "By the Way".
Miss Hydrangea
2009-07-22 . chapter 3
Oh my... Draco's bitingly humorous, but he really knows how to get himself into terrible situations, ne?
Miss Hydrangea
2009-07-22 . chapter 2
Hermione seemed rather out of character towards the end, but leading up to that debacle, the chapter was hilarious.
Miss Hydrangea
2009-07-22 . chapter 1
This was fantastic. It made me laugh multiple times, and Draco's voice is so vivid and so his own that it just makes me giddy.
xxTeardropKisses
2009-06-16 . chapter 12
As I skimmed through a C2 I recognized your story, but couldn't quite place it. I knew I'd read it previously, which turns out I have, but the reread was refreshing and worthwhile. I loved your story - the plot, the ideas, and (definitely the best part) your characterizations. I laughed aloud, jaw-dropped, and eye rolled.

Draco was very interesting. He was still his immature, rude, self-centered self, but he was able to make a genuine transformation while keeping those rather defining traits in-tact. I was a bit thrown off by him in the end, though. It was a pretty strong transition from the chapter previous, which I don't know if I liked or not. He was being unruly and defensive, but in the final chapter he was... nice and, well, sweet. Maybe the point was to prove that he had changed over the course of the story - you know, inner turmoil until he realizes his wrongs, and then he admits to himself and Hermione in a drastic change-of-heart. But part of me thinks it was a little too nice for his character!

Regardless, I loved the ending, and I'm glad he WAS nice and finally showed a little sincerity. I'm probably just being cynical, and I apologize for that :).

The letters were so funny, and kudos for the humor. I liked that even after Draco had changed concerning Hermione he still hadn't bothered to listen to his penpal. She would bring up her own troubles and how he ignored them rudely, but he still never bothered to touch on the subject and focused on himself and Hermione - I just loved that so much ha. I don't even know if that was intentional by you, but it was a good show of how he made the most changes towards Hermione and not anyone else hah.

This is turning into an essay, so I'll cut it short now. Great job, and I loved your amazing writing style - it was enjoyable to read which means enjoyable for you to write.

You mentioned writing your own fiction in one of the author notes. Any way of reading them online? Or were they published short stories? I'd love to check them out or anything you may write in the future. Good luck with that school (Columbia?) you tried getting into to if you're there still! (I read your Profile lol.)

-Dana (xxTeardropKisses) - Again, three years later! Hah
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