Well Done. I could always picture Warrick smilling.

It was alright but I wasn't at all satisfied with the ending. It seems as though it should have more to it.

To be honest, this is a great piece but it left me feeling a bit like there where lots of undercurrents and hidden meanings that I couldn't quite grasp. Maybe it needs to be fleshed out a bit. It was quite a surprise that Sara and Grissom where married, so that detracted a bit from other things happening in the scene.
Aside from that, it was awesome! :)

I really liked the idea and the execution, but the ending left me a bit unsatisfied. IMO it's lacking a bit of an explanation.
Sara's behavior of not breaking down was believable and a change from other stories.