Great work here! Is so, so sad and makes me want to cry but it has a good ending and I like it ^_^

Hello!!
OK Here I am just telling you something please write this:
Song: Historia de un sueño (history of a dream)

Artist: La oreja de Van Gogh

On the other version ok?? That will avoid a lot of misunderstandings.
And... I´m sorry if I didn´t write it very well but I wanted to do it in english because of everything here is in english

aw... sweet...

Nice translation and beautifuly written. This story kinda reminded me of an old Greek story I read once in school.

the story wasn't bad and neether was the translaition in to english.