Reviews for Perfection in a Pearl

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kris 2008-01-05 ch 1, anon.	abusegood doesn't always triumph, sometimes it turns bad. i like this look into the darker way things could have turned out. nice job!
J Luc Pitard 2007-05-25 ch 1,	abuseWow. Sad and beautiful. Nicely framed dialog-only storytelling.
animeboysrock23 2006-08-28 ch 1, anon.	abuseabsolute beautiful and very deep story
Sandstorm626 2006-05-23 ch 1,	abuseOh my. This story is great in so many ways. I first thought it was Naraku in the beginning until the flashback started, then I thought it was Inuyasha, for who else would be talking to Kagome like that, before Kagome said that Inuyasha was sulking somewhere. There's no fluff at all which is great, seeing how there are much too many fics with overdone fluff in it. Also, it's dark. I love dark fics. It makes the story so realistic instead of a saving the world in 20-30 minutes sort of thing. Amazing job and I'm glad you've graced us all with your work and writing style on ffnet. til next time...♪♫♪
Emmi-chan 2006-04-20 ch 1,	abuseHoly crap, how did I ever miss this story?? It was absolutely stunning and mind-capturing, bravo!
Katsheswims 2005-11-11 ch 1, anon.	abuseGreat story. It is very sad, but the end it a bit confusing. So what happened was Miroku joined Naraku or was forced to, and he betrayed the others and now they are all dead?
black mirage 2005-08-22 ch 1,	abuseThat was beautiful. Very good!
toxiclollipop 2005-07-07 ch 1,	abuseThat was great. This was very original...And I dont think Ive seen anyone make a whole story/oneshot out of mostly discussion between two people...I really liked this
Koorime13 2005-06-24 ch 1,	abuseWoa! Deep ^_~
nalia 2005-06-20 ch 1, anon.	abusewhoa. deep.
Kitroku 2005-06-10 ch 1,	abuseWow! bows down to the awsome fanfic writting powers
mira 2005-06-06 ch 1, anon.	abusenice contrast between happy and sad.
Otaku Mom 2005-06-05 ch 1,	abuseThis is sad. Love the conversation between Miroku and Kagome though...laughter before tears.
Kaoru 2005-06-04 ch 1, anon.	abuseLoved it!
will be anonymous 2005-06-02 ch 1, anon.	abuseNice. At first I thought it was gonna be about the Shikon jewel because almost all fics are. But it wasn't and just for that alone I like this. I do like everything else about it too because it's a) not about Inuyasha b) not horrible overdone angst c) not about the overdone Shikon jewel d) not about slapping characters together for badly done romance e) doesn't end like I expected it too when I first started reading f) isn't plotless and pointless WAFF g) deals with human imperfection - making mistakes Wow, so many points. Must be good, huh? Anyway, kickass job on providing something different from the norm and doing it with actual proper grammar and spelling. Thanks.

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