you have a wonderful story here. will you be continuing it?

WOW! This is AWSOME!
I love HP/SW crossovers!
This is awsomely brilliant!
Please, please, please, please, PLEASE UPDATE THIS!

Great start, can't wait to read more. Update soon!

yeah great chapter can’t wait for more so please update again as soon as you can do so.

yeah great chapter.

yeah great chapter.

yeah great chapter.

yeah great chapter.

yeah great chapter.

yeah great chapter.

interesting story...I hope you continue to update!

I enjoyed reading your story. I liked the way you have Neville & the others training to be Jedi. Please update soon.

Me Likey. keep updating. You have exelent ideas, and exelent writing skills.

Wierd, i never read the Star Wars books, so a lot of this dosen't make sence, but it's bloody AVESOME!

It is funny to see that while your authors' notes do not have spelling mistakes, the story abounds in them. It looks as though two different people are writing, one authors's notes, the other the story.

Try Proof-reading. Or get someone to beta your story. There are grammatical errors, which should be corrected. Your idea is good; unfortunately these errors in writing downplay whatever you write.

I might not have pointed out these errors if you had been updating very fast. But you are taking your time to update - 7 chapters in two years and the length of the chapters are not that much. So wherever grammatical errors are concerned, you are expected to atleast give a flawless chapter. Otherwise, this might turn away many readers.

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