great one ...!

I just read this and I really liked it...I have been wondering for a while if he contacted her...in my fanfiction I imply that he called her right after getting off with President Palmer. You did a great job of capturing how tough it must have been for Audrey after that day and I think you were probably right on with how she would deal with it.

Nice story. I always wondered if he would contact her and how. Loved it. Very well written.

Wonderful story. That was exactly what I needed after watching the finale. It breaks my heart that Audrey doesn't know. I really hope she gets that postcard. :)

Oh my god... your planning to continue this right? I mean you have to! PLEASE continue soon!

Lovely story. The emotion was great and the detail. Very good job on this story.

Very good. Loved it. You showed Audrey's feelings perfectly.

Even tough I'm not a fan of Audrey, I really liked your story. It's sad, but beautifully written.

nice story- I keep wanting somebody to write an Audrey fic and here it is! you're a good writer, and kept both Audrey and Jack in character. Sending a blank postcard seems like something Jack would do. good job.

very good and very imaginative. i had never considered how jack might try and contact audrey but part of me knows that he would find a way. i hope you plan more. i can't wait to read it.

Oh wow, I really liked this. Great handle on Audrey's emotions - I can see her rational side not believing but wanting to so bad.