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JovianJeff 2008-04-30 ch 11,	abuseGreat chapter and I feel torn about which part I liked more, both were engaging. I love how you are addressing the Asgard story and yet how Beast Wars worked in this was also intriguing. Thank you for writing this!
acer-sigma 2008-04-27 ch 11,	abuseReally loving the reaction that Preceptor presence is giving the Asgard! Thor definitely sounds like he's reverting to an earlier incarnation, I'm sure the reactions to that will be interesting. Gotta say, Prime's playback of Primal's message and the indication that Megatron will have knowledge of his 'decendent's' memories seems to be a good reason not to reactivate the Decepticons and hope the new timeline will be better off.
Harry2 2008-04-27 ch 11,	abuseWell, things now are starting to make sense. I just hope that the forces that are on the loose now can help prevent Megatron from ruining the time line!
James W 2008-04-09 ch 10,	abuseGood story. I like how it's going so far.
Harry2 2008-03-07 ch 10,	abuseThe Dinobots are nice for blunt instruments, but I still prefer grace with my fire power. And I think that Thor has FINALLY woken up and realized that the Asgard are wasting away! Its time to revatilize his people before they themselves become obsolete!
acer-sigma 2008-03-07 ch 10,	abuseMust say Prime's officers have taken things rather well. Nice scene with the Dinobots. Least they're a bit more controlable than when they were first introduced in the series. Though it was weird that they didn't use the matrix or Vector Sigma to give them life in the series. Thor definitely sounds like he's gonna go on the warpath. I'm assuming that the temporal disturbance in the previous chapter is what caused the old memories and what not to come forward. Can't wait to see what you've got planned for his meeting with the council. Really loved Jack's 'I'm going to start cleaning my gun. I promise you there's going to be an "accident".' It's always good to see Kinsey and the NID get put in their place. Though I'm surprised Kinsey hasn't insisted that he renegotiate with the Autobots. Poor Carter, she better not think too hard about what Blaster just did. Can just see her having another brain freeze.
JovianJeff 2008-03-07 ch 10,	abuseNice inclusion of the Dinobots, very spot on with how I remember them when first introduced in the '80s. I'm curious to see how Wheeljack's experiment will work out.
Ultra Prime-Autobot Hero 2008-03-07 ch 10,	abuseNice to see an update! This story amazes me every time I read it! Sg-1 and transformers rock together and you brought it! Good luck on future chapters!
Ultra Prime-Autobot Hero 2008-02-16 ch 8,	abuseNice!
Proud to be an X-Nerd 2007-12-05 ch 8,	abuseWhat?!? Ok, that's not good. What in the world would he want to do that for? -sighs- I'm glad there is still another chapter after this one. I really don't think I could have stayed sane if I had to wait for the explanation to that. Good work. This chapter seemed to have been layed out much better. It has a steadier feeling, less rushed then some of the others before it. It's cool to read the first chapters and then come to this one and see how far you've progressed since you started it.
JovianJeff 2007-12-03 ch 9,	abuseThis is an awesome concept! And very well executed. I guessed from the way the last chapter ended it would be mind blowing, but nothing like what was presented. Bravo!
Harry2 2007-12-02 ch 9,	abuseOH man! Temporal paradoxs give me a HEADACHE the size of the Ark! And that is some headache!
Proud to be an X-Nerd 2007-11-05 ch 7,	abuseO yes! Daniel must be punished for all the times he's died on us! Get him with something good. :) I think I might have pulled something while I was laughing at that bit with Carter. That was, by far, one of the funniest parts in a story I've read for a while. :D
Proud to be an X-Nerd 2007-11-05 ch 6,	abuse-sighs- I want my own Autobot. Seriously, I think that's going to be the only thing on my Christmas wish list. :D Good work so far. :) I was going to go watch a movie with my folks, but I descided I have to read a few chapters first. See what you made me do? :D
Proud to be an X-Nerd 2007-11-02 ch 5,	abuseI wish this wasn't set so far back, BUT I'm glad you did it when Jack was still with the team. :) And that, was SO cool. Loved the scene with Omega Supreme, and the way you described Hary was 'very' funny. :)

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