I really liked your version of an alternative path for Alanna to take :D

Yay! That's so cute. I like how alex isn't portrayed as a bad guy. It's a good story.

aw such a nice ending! it was great i loved it =)

Well, what I have to say is, "Congratulations on finishing this lovely story!" It has been a nice adventure, from the beginning of the split of the twins to the agreement to the betrothal. Somehow, on the way, Tortall is saved, friends are made, and the wicked are punished.

I hope that you enjoyed writing this as much as I enjoyed reading this.

this was one AWESOME story!

I think that that last two lines was a very good and fitting ending to the story, althought I would have liked to read about the wedding and how Alex greeted her. That would have been some fluffy-goodness. tehe.

sorry I haven't been reviewing lately but I have been readind and this is a great story

Thayet! I like how you managed to include Buri and Thayet so I can see how the story will continue a lot like they series with those two

okay you confused me now-where did thayet and buri come from. otherwise it's great.

Aww! Loved it! Very nicely done, not too over the top, really like an epilogue Tamora Pierce would've written. Nicely written, few mistakes and beautiful and simple ending.

Keep Writing, forever a fan,

xxTunstall Chickxx

Aw, that was cute! THey have to get married soonish.

I really like this story! It is so interesting! I am glad you have Faithful in here even if his name is Scrap. I notice that you tend to spell fief wrong. I really like this story, but I would absolutely love it if the chapters were longer!

Aw. Very cute. loved it. UPDATE SOON! Very well written and flows well. Overall great job.

Keep Writing,

xxTunstall Chickxx

Love the story. So sad about Thom. Not much Jon in the story. oh well. Wait is this the end? R u done? Is there more?

Interesting. So when is alex going to tell his dad? That should be an entertaining chapter.