aw that was soo good, poor Kai. I imagined the person to be Hilary is that why you the put the he/she thing there so we could chose who it was that found the note. Well it was really good

Hey this was really sweet and really cool. I thought it was quite sad and I know how he felt; I show my pain through my writing a lot but sometimes I can also channel other people's pain but I use a lot of my experience. This was really touching and very sweet so keep it up.

aww i luv it

this is pretty good. could be a little longer but it's still good. Some good images!

Wow...

That was really, really deep. I WANNA KNOW WHO THE READER WAS! REI? MAX? HILARY? TYSON? ...oh, wait, no, that last one was just plain creepy. Ah well, MAKE A SEQUEL PLEASE!

oh wow. very powerful, very emotional. nice job, i like this. like the title too. ^^ keep up the excellent work!
have a nice day

Really, really sad...but I think Kai overreacted a little...

WOW! This is so beautiful and sad! i could never write something like this!

Gah... *Drooles*

I love the whole theme, and the quote, and all the horrible goodness(that that make sense? oh well)

Poor Kai, WHO IS THE READER?! With the whole "he/she" thing, I'm gonna make a wild guess and say Rei. Why? because with the hair, well, kinda reminds me of a girl from behind. ^^;

Yesh, i ish nuts. Wanna make something of it??

I thought so.

-Kinaua

HOw incredibally sad! *sob* that was depressing... but I guess it had a happy ending...
Well, continue writing great stories! ^__^

so sweet. so beuatiful

Cool. I like.

Dude. That is like...so deep.

Hi aimee! I'm specially impressed by this story, its great! And the phoenix thing is so hp! Keep up the good work :)

great lol