First of all, I would like to say how much I enjoyed this fic! It’s not often that I read an insightful story that focuses on a character’s thoughts without being sappy, clichéd, or angst-ridden. This story is well thought-out and organized, and I hardly need add that the spelling, punctuation, and grammar are impeccable.

My favorite aspect of this fic is that your Soi isn’t stupid—she knows that Nakago is “nothing like the kind man I thought him to be”. Brava! The worst part of being in love with a “bad guy” is that you know how bad he really is.

Wai, I loved it! Soi doesn't get enough indepth looks like this. It's great that you were able to look at her character deeply enough to expand on her doubts about Nakago, and not just hav her seem like some blindly obsessesive character.

Thou shall not grow tired of Nakago/Soi!!

*ahem* What I mean to say is... Great fanfic you have here! Soi's devotion to Nakago is admirable, and even though I know her unwavering love is what eventually caused her demise, she was happy to be useful to him - and I guess the pain and sadness in his eyes told her just what he could never do with words.

Keep writing Naka/Soi fics, and I'll be sure to read and review them all. ^^ Ja ne!

~~Ruby