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| movieholic 2008-06-10 ch 1,  | abuseI love the ending. Another great story, I'm going to try to read all your others because there is no denying you're a fantastic writer. |
| Marilia11 2008-02-02 ch 1, | abuseVery good story! From the biginning I was sure that the little girl's name was Phoebe!Then I read the name was Felicia and felt a little disappointed but it was necessary for this great ending! I had always imagined that as Leo knew Piper as a little girl, so could Cole have known Phoebe! Please write more! Actually a story with present Phoebe remembering this scene with Cole and telling him (or vice versa) would be great! |
| ColeTurnerFan 2008-01-12 ch 1, | abuseI like it, and enjoyed it. They had said that Leo always watched over the Charmed ones, even as little kids, and even had accindently bumped into them acouple of times, so why not Cole Turner |
| Chaos and Creation 2007-11-23 ch 1, | abuseYou managed to capture so well in this story. |
| AnimeAlexis 2006-06-11 ch 1, | abuseJust as good as your other one. I read that first. Please write some more! I love good PhoebeCole. |
| LILBIT 2005-06-08 ch 1, anon. | abuseYou must write more story about these teo charters yoare very very good. you are my favorite writer. |
| Charmed-Snow 2005-06-03 ch 1, | abuseWow, it's a great story. You didn't write Charmed fics for a long while. I'm happy that you come back with this awesome story. I love it very much. Please keep writing. |
| Natalie 2005-06-02 ch 1, anon. | abuseGenuinely good story. Very cleverly written too. I don't think I even have any quibbles which is unusual for me! Good job. |
| coleslady 2005-06-01 ch 1, | abuseI loved this story, thanks. Cole meeting little Pheobe, his future love. wonderful. |
| shel 2005-06-01 ch 1, anon. | abuseliked this one...the twist with the little girl lying about her name was cute even tho the story would've worked just fine without it...loved cole's line to raynor at the end where he manages to tell the truth and pass the test and still be true to himself... |