I'm running a fever, and laughing this hard is making my headache worse... The comment about Kavanagh liking boys made me choke on a coughdrop. I am a huge fan of Dr. Zelenka's, and this story totally freaking rocks! ;)
~*~Lila Mae

The term ROFL does not even begin to describe my mirth.

This is a great story but on the ninth chapter, the page doesn't seem to load right. I dunno if it's just me or not but I get to this point; Sheppard righted the overturned medical cart as Beckett grabbed a

And it stops.

You continue to amaze me with your creative and hysterical ideas. I'm usually a hardcore shep whumper, but you're just too delightful to pass up. Perhaps you could give us a nice combo of the two?

*kicking weakly on floor*
*still quietly howling in laughter*
That... *gasp* randy... *gaspgasp* Czech... *HOWL*
-}-@
Krys, who KNOWS that brilliant scientist types are quite randy, thankyouverymuch
*snortschortleguffaw*

Hehe, ah, loved every second of this one. :D

This was damned funny! I especially liked Mckay's comment “It’s me you freaking fornicating nut job.” :-)

Didn't think Kavanagh had it in him! I figured he'd be crying for his mommy within 30 seconds of being captured. Good for him, especially since it's going to get him whumped!

Kavanagh, whips, and chains are a combination that is disturbing in too many ways to count... ;-) Poor Zelenka. Someone needs to explain to him the origin of the term "Mickey Finn".

that was very very funny, i actually fell off my chair from laughing. poor radek, who knew he was such a dark horse?

Well done. I read it straight through and it was really good.

Wonderful, witty beginning. Love the addition of Rodney's smell. LOL.

Hooray! Many cheers and lots of clapping! Bravo! Sorry, just felt an appropriate response to a terrific performance!! The audience goes wild! Encore! Encore! Big silly grin all over face, sore hands from clapping...

Your Rodney-dialogue is brilliant! Everything is technically perfect and I'm loving it...

Brilliant chapter! Especially about life-sucking tax agencies! Oh and Zelenka's popularity too! I'll keep reading and review later on...