What the hell is up with your damn spelling?! Prince INNES! Princess EIRIKA! Oh my gosh...Who the hell is Hineas? It's Innes. When was the last time you played Sacred Stones? I'm sorry, but this was too...mixed to enjoy. Sorry.

Very nice so far. You've got Hineas down great. Is this Ephraim/Hineas? That would be awesome!

Can't wait for the next chapter :D

Hi! Love the opening chapter. I like how you wrote the characters. I hope this is going to be a Hineas/Ephraim fic!! The only fic I read that had this pairing was your fic... We need more Hineas/Ephraim fic!! Anyway, can't wait for you to continue!

Hm . . . hiya Rosa. Been a while, eh? ^_^

Nice to see you've gotten into Fire Emblem. I admit I've started to dabble in it too, lol . . .

I've always enjoyed stories that have little tidbits that you just can't get unless you've played through the game a certain way. Your weaving in the Hineas/Joshua and Dozra/Rachel support conversations was most amusing. I'm interested in what other treasures you plan on adding in future chapters.

(_^_-_^_)>O

"HE'LL be here."

"SHE'LL be here."

"THEY'LL be here."

Innes has it against everyone, don't he? One-sided scorn somehow befits the only male warrior from Frelia. Tana, Syrene, Vanessa, Gill--wait, no. The only SNIPER from Frelia. (nods)

Keep writing.

Nicely done. Looking forward to more.

Yay! I like it! Is this intended yaoi? B/c I vote for Innes/Ephraim!! Oh, by the way, Innes=Hineas, just so I don't confuse u. ^^ Update soon!

Well, this is interesting... I'm not all that used to the Jappanese names, only the English names, but I pretty much know who's who. Well, please update when you can.

Good! I like the story, please update soon.

Oh, right! Is this another HineasEphraim story?
(I hope this is EirikEphraimHineas triangle) (XD)