I liked your fanfic a lot (you even made me cry!): please go on!
It's really an interesting cliff-hanger at the end of chapter 4 _-
Compliments and bye...

keep writing! I'm the biggest Allen/Hitomi shipper as well as the biggest Allen!Angst fan...this is so juicy, I need more! XD We loyal fangirls demand a fifth chapter! Demanding in the nicest way possible of course...;;;;;;

A/H forever! ::Runs, dodging thwaps, chairs, bombs, and mallets from angered V/H fans:: ;;;;; Ja!

Lovely!

good job keep it up!

Why'd you stop? You should seriously continue! If you don't continue I'll, I'll . . .I'll do something really mean! and cruel too! j/k, but you should continue. It's a really good fic and you just shouldn't stop. I hope you decide to add another chapter soon.

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Why won't you finish this story, you cruel girl? It's so engaging right now and I insist that you write chapter five immediately! *stomps foot*

Oh. Wow. 0_o This was absolutely incredible. I love the way you're writing this. A lot of stories I've read just go 'oh, allen, I love you' 'oh, hitomi, I love you too' -end of story. Kinda sad, huh? That's way I was so glad to read this. I really like how you're going in depth into Allen's character and past, as well as his past relationships. It makes it seem more realistic somehow. Please tell me you're going to write some more! I can't stand cliffhangers; I've gotta know what's going to happen!

I luv this stuff! When's chapter 5 gonna be put up? I can't wait!

Please hurry with the next chapter! And about your A/N after the first chapter, I don't think you're insane. _ AU fics are always fun to read.

falls over..oh please, please more? its really a wonderful story. *whimpers* more? please?

OMG, you are amazing. Where is the rest? There have only been about three other Escaflowne fanfics that have held my unwavering attention like this (trust me, you're among good company ;) )) *Please* I implore you to rescue us from this cliffhanger!

Man, that was a great chapter, but when are you gonna write some more? I really can't wait to see what happens next!

ohhhhhhh cliff hanger! Good chapter though, I can't wait to read more_

Where is the rest? Awfully cruel of you to leave us in Allen withdrawal, don't you think? _

Oh, I like this, I really do. It's so different and refreshing to see Hitomi paired with someone other than Van (not that there's anything wrong with him, of course.). I really like the bonding between her and Allen. You are going to write more of this, aren't you? Please, please do.