Nice poem!! Love it--simple but eloquent. Adding to my favourite list so I can share it with others. Go Saiyuki!!

Nice! Good thoughts really works with the gang

Now I don't actually KNOW this story (I love poetry), but I have an IDEA of what it's about from other people. Anyways, what I was going to say: this poem was awesome, just like all of the others that I've read n reviewed so far of yours. I like when people (I am one) write about darkness that lurks within themselves and others. And to anyone who thinks bad of it, screw you! Anyways, keep up the AWESOME work. If you ever want to chat, my sn is Pure Evil Youkai.

Very well thought out for each person I mean it fits them perfectly. I think you have their soul down pretty good or at least one part of it. I'm pretty sure theres more to it but I likes your thoughts! Nice job!

oh thats really cute i like it!