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| sterro 2006-01-20 ch 1, anon. | abusei like this story...n.n |
| K-chan16 2005-10-03 ch 1,  | abuseTT_TT! Watefall tears, darling!! Such a wonderful perspective! my heartstrings, my poor, poor hearts strings... *sobs silently in a corner* You write so... rawr! I hugs you now! *glomp*f |
| tehMimo 2005-07-25 ch 12, | abuseI have to say that this is one of the funniest ficcies I have ever read... Ever! xD Bulma's POV ish hilarious and it's just soo nicely written. I especially liked the birth of Trunks with nobody but Piccolo! Who would've thought it?! Other than you of course. You are a genius. |
| Oozaru Angel 2005-06-12 ch 12, | abuseI love it! It's great! |
| Miko Kikyou 2005-06-11 ch 12, | abuseGreat story, though i had to skip a paragraph here and there because it got a little too detailed, but that's just me. and also one little thing i wanted to mention, gohan and the others didn't know that vegeta had gone super sayian until he fought with android 19, but in your story gohan abserved vegeta sparing as a super sayian with goku. but you get mondo extra bonus point for the whole piccolo delivering the baby thing. so funny. also i loved the last chapter with vegeta's point of view. nice ending touch. |
| triniprincess89 2005-05-14 ch 12, | abuse**!...now this a deep story...i luved it keep wrting... |
| Kuzah 2005-01-17 ch 8, | abusepiccolo delivering a baby. HALARIOUS ;) |
| onesexycatwoman 2004-12-07 ch 1, | abuseI loved your story it was really great. I hope that when i get my storys put up you will read them |
| BbyChick 2004-06-05 ch 12, anon. | abusesequel! |
| Kusje 2004-03-19 ch 1, | abuseVery interesting!! i like ^^ update soon! |
| CrimsonKitty89 2003-12-30 ch 12, | abuseReally good. I love the last chapter (Vegeta pov) and how u didn't make Goku seem like an idiot like I've seen in a lot of other fics. He was actually saecastic and smirking! that is how Goku should be but u gotta luv him in any form. anyways, gonna check to see if you have written anymore stories since u r so talented. |
| venus 2003-12-02 ch 12, anon. | abusehey oh my gosh that was amazing the ending was terrific the way you had vejiitas point of view allows the reader to experience what he was thinking when goku died. i had a complete image of vejiita hovering in the sky with a defeated look on his face as piccolo spoke to him not wanting piccolo to see his emotions. when you mentioned how bulma and vejiita were the only friends he had i felt for him because they are his family the only ones he has and to have goku willingly sacrifice his life like that he must have been furious. goku became such a central part in vejiitas life as he was what fuelled vejiitas motivation imajine having the reason you live the reason you push yourself everyday torn from you.and bulma has to make vejiita realise that that isn't all he has and he realises it when he says: `Not everything was shattered. She was still real' great epiphany the humour cracked me up especially when piccolo played mid wife to bulma. you are an excellent author keep it up venus |
| GeneralDuke 2003-11-19 ch 12, | abuseIt is for stories like these that this site was created. You have accomplished something that is a great tribute to the imagination of the others around you. We all should be blessed with your abilities. You have done well and I salute you. |
| Lady Razorsharp 2003-10-24 ch 1, | abuseI'm not the world's biggest DBZ fan...but this is excellent. Hot stuff, too! Whew! Bulma's got sass. Bravo! |
| Magician 2003-09-21 ch 12, | abuseI'm impressed. I'm very impressed. It took me so long to read this story, and ever moment spent was worth it. I'm dying for a sequel right now. I'm begging you, please write more! |