uh, you do know that 'thou' is pronounced as 'thao' and that the 'thou' used in this context is supposed to be spelt as 'though'?

and by the way, they can't do THAT when they're both guys. i just find that really impossible.

other than that, gd story!

Ferrero

ps. i'm still not a great fan of slash fics.

Awesomeness. *favourites*

You might want to change the rating of this story. It's rated K or G and there's a lemon in it. I liked it, short and sweet. Just remember to change the rating. It'd be bad if little kids read that...

hey, thanks for reviewing my fic.."Of chocolates and Cakes"...i didn't know that they didn't use "forms"...i ASSUMED so, cuz in hong kong, they did, and in Japan they have the junior high n high school stuff...^^'...thanks for telling me though, so..do they use "grade 7, 8, 9"? if you have the time, please email me back so I can change it!

~b4byk4k4sh1 (keh.

P.S.: sorri for not actually READING your fic, but I don't read yaoi...=P

Sweet, yes *sigh* we don't know how much you enjoy writing this but we really enjoy reading this fic. Nice job, dear!

Sigh. So sweet and tender. You convade the emtion very well and I loved the way they finally came together. A wonderful little fic..very well done indeed.