Reviews for Super BustAMove Mog is kidnapped!

Kaji The Kitsune 2006-06-30 ch 2,	abuseI am a fan of Bust-A-Move, this is pretty good fic. Unfortunately, the writing style needs work. At some points, I felt confused. -looks at profile- You made three fics. And... this must be... your... second one. I know this fic is old. But maybe you should consider looking at some fics or read some books, see their style and develop your own style. Again, Nice work just needs some tuning. -RatchetsKittychi
Dekadeci 2005-10-23 ch 2,	abuseSorry if I'm reviewing again, but, especially in this chapter, you're spelling Wolo half-wrong. The L in his name is not supposed to be capitalized. Other than the fact that you're probably missing a few punctuation marks and enter keys (and "furnitures" is not supposed to be the appropriate word in that sentence), you're good!
Dekadeci 2005-10-20 ch 1,	abuseI can apologize for you not using the @ sign. After all, FanFiction deletes every one of those signs (and ^ signs, too) it sees. I've written a fanfic based on the same game (I don't own the game, but a particular storyline's stuck itself in my mind), but its whole premise is probably different from yours. (I've edited the name of the obvious character to get around the character-deletion problem.) Thank you for being brave enough to write the first fanfic (I think) based on the Puzzle Bobble series!
The Ninja Gulpin 2005-08-14 ch 2,	abuseNice! I have been waiting for a Super Bust-a-Move fic! Please continue soon. ([^w^]) Oh, and it's Mr.@.