i am so stealing that bedtime story for my kids*!

*babysat kids, that is.

I loved this story and hope that you will write a sequel. A suggestion for the sequel is for Alex to be kidnapped and David goes to rescue him. I agree that you did a great job in developing his character though.

8D This was so sweet, heh like the old woman said ;) Lol picturing David acting out "The Three Little Pigs" makes me laugh 8D Lmfao, I loved how he changed it around xD IRS... jeez xD
It was interesting how you compared him to other rich characters, definitly a wonderful way to characterize David =3 You're writing was also pleasant to read and easy to follow 8D Instant fav.

Aw...

This... was... so... full... of... WIN!

I don't know where to begin really! It was brilliantly written in so many ways. I loved the perspective you've brought out in David's character. Personally, I believe him to be just as you described and I love the fact that others probably have the same idea of him. Then of course, you got to his fatherly side and I was just giggling and gushing with glee. It was so adorably sweet. And you still compose himself as a powerful man. Glorious. Absolutely glorious. I'm going to just have to look through any of your other fan fictions for the sake of reading what else you've composed.

Have you ever considered a sequel. Say Lex is really stupid and has Alex kidnapped. He would be in for a nasty shock. The justice league wouldn't even need to help.

This was a really great story, very adorable! I felt you really wrote Xanatos' character perfectly. I'd love to read more Xanatos fics from you. He's my favorite character. ;)

too cool
awesome

Adorable fic!

You've made "Good" Xanatos is such an appealing character here, lol, and I loved how you mixed in the DC universe as well.

Supurb job!

~RD

This was awesome. ^_^ Most of your work is stellar, and this piece is no exception. I say most because I haven't read them all, ya know. I really liked your Static Shock story "Paradox" as well as the other Gargoyle fic "Duck". For this story, I love the story Xanatos told his son, the interraction between him and Lex, between him and Lois, and how he treated the old woman. I love the descriptions, such as Xanatos being able to recognize the viper in Lex, it was the same look he saw in the morning mirror after all. Guh, there are other things I like, little descriptions and verbage.

I'm glad to see you've done this crossover, as I'm of the opinion that Gargoyles is sorely lacking when it comes to crossovers. But then, that's my belief, and it may not be true. ^_~

~ctrl_issue

how adorable, you really captured xanatos's fatherly side. I must ask, do yo normaly do Superman/Gargoyles x-overs? it was sutly done. kodos

Very nicely done. I loved the DC references and found Xanatos' love for his family adorable.

Absolutely adorable, and very funny!

Cute and wonderful, loved the mental picture of David Xantos acting out the characters.

An interesting crossover, and one that illustrates that yes, 'evil' people can turn good. You've managed to turn David Xanatos into a three-dimensional person instead of leaving him as the cardboard cutout he got left as in the series. Thanks for sharing your wonderful writing. :)